Angels Above

Angels Above
A. W. Nutter

At fifteen, I was to young to become a father
At fourteen, she didn’t need to be a mother
We were old enough to have sexual relations
Unable to understand the implications

We cried out in anguish to the angels above
Pleading for their mercy and their love

Parents abusing us for this sinful union
Adolescents fearful and full of confusion
Not able to cope with the adult pressure
The mothers young body goes into labor

We cried out in anguish to the angels above
Pleading for their mercy and their love

My son struggled between life and death
I held his hand as he took his last breath
From my hands his little body was pried
The tears falling like rain from my eyes

We cried out in anguish to the angels above
Pleading for their mercy and their love.

Occasionally the mother and my path will cross
Seldom do we mention or discuss our loss
But every year at nine, on the sixteenth of May
We both agreed, to light a candle and silently pray

To the angels watching from heaven above
 Shower our son with mercy, show him your love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beesley Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 7:04 AM
between the angels above and the demons below we have to struggle in this purgatorial prison called life...stretched into nothing
K. Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 10:39 PM
Oh wow, Anthony, I have to tell you, I literally got chills as I read this--I could just feel the emotions and grief across your words and it literally moved me--the repetition of your couplet with the angels was very effective and take comfort in knowing that you have your very own angel watching over you--God bless you!
Smith Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Very touching tribute. I lost a baby and a brother at 19, but I had a baby already, then another at 20, another at 22. Now I have 5 grandchildren. Both my daughters lost a baby, my youngest two and now she has 3 children. My son has 2 boys, one adopted. Your boy is in Heaven, I'm sure. Ellen
Dufresne Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 5:44 AM
This certainly is a beautiful piece about the most important of subjects. So very well done and thank you for bringing it to the forefront. These babies are living souls now with the Father of all. Many do not see that.
Haick Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Hey Tony, Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in Constance's Contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 11:12 PM
Anthony, I liked how you had that little refrain going on in your poignant poem. You did great in the contest! Luv, andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Anthony, I was touched by the sincerity of your poem and found it to be very moving. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie
George   Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 4:05 AM
I all too well know your pain, Anthony. I pray that by my reading this winning entry in Constance's contest, It has helped lessen your pain. I find writing about it can be a very powerful medicine. I currently am liberating myself from the past through a book I am writing 'A memoir of Roses and Thorns'. Much love, Lainie
La France Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 8:40 AM
let me brush a tear away, dear heart, I know this pain, for I held my perfect baby in my arms, in death also...please check your soup mail...
Hilliker Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 12:45 AM
This is so many wonderful things! Beautiful write. I'm sorry for your loss.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 9:32 AM
you've got to put some new ones in waiting patiently! :)
Molotsi Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 11:25 PM
It's hard to find the right words to say about this. Its so hard for me to deal with death. You should know that it takes a great deal of strength to write so openly about your loss, that what makes this write so beautiful. great great work
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 9:59 AM
This is a powerful and deeply painful write my friend you show great strength in wriiting this and sharing it with all i mean that . Beautiful write.
Fraser Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 3:13 PM
So sad and heartfelt Anthony, a quite superb piece >> thank you for sharing this gem >> James
Shango Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 3:09 PM
This poem is so full of sadness and faith and beauty, Anthony, one day in heaven we will understand and say well done. God has not only given you a strong and loving heart, he has given you a gift to write and kindle others faith. Enjoy the blessings of the holiday, my friend.
Freeman Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 6:19 PM
This is awesome and beautiful Anthony. The Soul of your son is certainly not lost. The spirit of love loses nothing, as a soul is love.Have I not seen you on another network, where I receive a comment?Smile! Sincerely, Moses
Harman Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 4:26 AM
That actually hurt really good, what a beautiful story. I guess you can tell i am somewhat of an emotional masochist, reading others pain, heals mine.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Beautiful tragic story.. I also lost a baby boy at 5 months old from lung problems but this young love and loss is so deeply moving and touching, Anthony... happy u shared this experience with us today... also read your comment on Michael Harman's unkind comments to some of the poets on Soup.. bravo Anthony for speaking your mind and standing your ground... he also did not "get anything" from my Food for Thought - An Introspection poem posted today.. what can we do about this kind of thing? luv
Freeman Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 2:28 PM
Beautiful
Harman Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Nice, expressive,,, i felt it... yay
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Angels do watch and God embraces newborn babes having left earth just a moment after birth. Forever... Nice and sad write, Anthony. Happy Christmas and New Year 2010 to you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dufresne Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:44 PM
Anthony, I don't know how I missed this incredibly important ominous write of yours.Your agreement and what you do in remembrance is so important and beautiful. Yes He is well loved, that is sure from there and from here. Incredibly well written poem. Thank you for sharing such an important literary piece and experience. Sincerely, Robert
Owens Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 8:53 AM
I love your poem...but it is so sad. I feel for you both...Marty
Nealy Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 8:06 PM
omg...sad yet beautiful, im sorry for your loss
Byrne Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 6:24 PM
I think this would make good lyrics to a song! Well done.
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