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ANGELS ( Collaboration with Cory Long ) by~ CORY LONG Angels are all around~ They can be anything holding your hand when life looks glum when feeling as though you want to give up Many things changed when you passed on alone, scared by myself I will be your Angel. by~ P.D: Angels are among us~ walking side by side! Giving us strength to believe in. As the day draws close my breath is overwhelmed by beauty. I open my mind to the flight of your wings. The fascinating way your innocence sings. A collaboration with *Cory Long ~My collaboration contest~

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Date: 2/4/2016 10:56:00 PM
great **SKAT**
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Date: 10/27/2015 3:28:00 PM
this one puts me in mind of dear Lucilla who passed on. I remember the way you visited her. That was so awesome that you did that.
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:03:00 PM
this was so nice. Where IS our Cory anyway?? I enjoyed seeing your remarks to A.P on the blogs. Stirring the pot but me likes it hot!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:59:00 AM
This is sooo beautiful. I love it!!! Thank you so much my friend, PD. Take care always! luv, leonora
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Date: 8/19/2011 4:41:00 AM
the angels walk amongst us, and give a helping hand, appear when we need em most, finest people hold your hand... excellent..
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:29:00 AM
Angels are a lovely topic. I especially love the flow of the last 2 lines. Hope today is starting off bright! Gwendolen
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Date: 8/15/2011 8:27:00 AM
enjoyed reading your collaboration!!
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:17:00 PM
Dear Linda Sweet poem about angels - I hope they are real. Thanks you for your comments. The last line in this poem is very fine. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/6/2011 11:48:00 PM
Angelic poetry, Linda! You find beauty in friendship and that is saying a lot! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:30:00 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady loved it...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/4/2011 7:11:00 PM
Good to know that you both believe in angels..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:59:00 PM
cory is my buddy and friend and she has penned a delightful piece and u have impressed me PD my BFF with such versatility to adjust to all the poets written with thus far.. u are super amazing.. beyond Wonder Woman.... my soup mail is also non functional as my back key and browser on PS.since the upgrade.. so either send me words on an older poem or at your BFF for life..
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Date: 8/4/2011 2:17:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today P.D. and Cory. Wishing you both the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:59:00 PM
I definitely agree with you two! Angels are indeed all around us :D -- this sure is a sweet right that also celebrates friendship, nice job pd, of keeping in with Cory's format and wonderful message here :)-- and happy to read a new post from you! I was starting to wonder where you were?? hmm ;) winkity wink wink-- super busy eh?
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:45:00 PM
You work so well together, PD : ) I must get around to that contest...
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:47:00 PM
I really like your joint entry.......George
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:57:00 AM
pd you did an amazing job on the second half of this collaboration. Thanks for the chance to write together and hope we can do it many more times. Check out "Underneath a canopy of trees." Michael F and I did it..
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Date: 8/4/2011 2:57:00 AM
gems everywhere..all your collabs are fantastic P.D.. sounds like you are really enjoting... glitter up and cheers to cory as well! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:42:00 AM
this is a wonderful job you did with Cory, PD. You are really good at using a poets own form in a collaboration. No wonder you wanted to make such a challenge for youself!
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:14:00 PM
Cory, thank you! this was amazing... short ***but, touched my inner thought.. maybe a question i think of every now and than/..... i linger a tough thought that if there was~~ and~~ is angels?? would they get involved in our humaan lifes??? Are they our friends of he or he??? lol... yes confusing.... very muched enjoyed, and a special honor... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:54:00 AM
pd this came out amazing.. It was an honor as well to write with you.. So I can trust you Huh that is even better.. take care your friend cory