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Angelic Aroma

In a tranquil trance,
admiring elegant swans,
flowing along stately streams,
I rested my wearied head,
upon her soothing bosoms.

Her subtle fingers pacified
melancholic tones within the
chambers of my misplaced mind.
Warmth of her ethereal embrace
together with the early Spring sun,
dissolved the protective glacier,
shielding my dormant somber soul.

Under serene sapphire skies,
her eyes like unique emeralds - sparkled,
charming each beat of my heart to murmur.

As we reminisced about childhood memories,
an isolated tear escaped from my eye,
innocently immersing her silken skin.
Captivated by her angelic aroma,
I pondered if she was an angel,
cradling me within a citadel in heaven.

As twilight ignited merigold radiance 
through silver violet clouds,
her succulent lips whispered
sweet musings as they caressed mine.

The taste from her last sensual kiss,
still lingered as she ascended to the heavens,
as I pleaded;

"Take me with you."

To which she replied;
"It's not your time."

Simple Musing
Silent One
22 March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bateman Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Hello Silent, Belated congratulations here on POTD!! Beautiful and inspiring imagery. Loving with both the heart and the soul is where it is. Most certainly so. Brilliant Work!! Best Easter Wishes, Gary
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Beautiful imagery again, Silent One. Heavenly!
Neumann Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Simply great. Sometimes it is not our time. Kai
Sathasivam Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Excellent. Romance is your great subject and you always write beautifully. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Sweet angels here abide... Great write Silent;-)
Leiser Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 6:41 PM
I always smile when you write a “simple musing”, Silent, when to me your poem is always so deep, with many layered meanings! Written with superb elegance and sophistication! :)
Anish Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Nice poem about an angel. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Romance is your specialty SO, as shown in your latest effort, congratulations for POTD honors...
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Lovely and romantic, but not soppy. The title was too tempting not to stop to read. Regards // paul
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 2:41 PM
I agree w/Eileen ... you are a master of romance poetry, SO. The joy and the sadness is felt right to the verse. A beautiful poem, even more so because of the sorrowful parting. Love and joy always.
Manassian Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 7:08 AM
You do romance well, SO. This testifies to that.
Y. Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 5:37 PM
WoW! What a romantic masterpiece. I could feel the "longing and desire" in each line. Good content and imagery. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 4:40 PM
This is such a beautiful poem, SO. My interpretation was similar to Cheryl's, but it can go many ways. Heartfelt congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Sandra
Lawless Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Beautifully written SO, and with an ending that leaves so many interpretations to be explored. Congrats on POTD
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Yes John, that was what I wanted to create... I have enjoyed how people have interpreted this poem, especially Cheryl Hoffman... Thanks for the visit..
Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Silent One, an absolutely beautiful poem expressed sensuously in a dreamy and serene atmosphere.. Intriguing and captivating, I willingly lost myself in the lovely dreamscape you so artfully created.. and I adore the ending. A brilliant write! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors. Enjoy the accolades my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Oh yes, your 'Day I became a Poet' hasn't gone unnoticed, that's for sure.. It'll be a pleasure to read it now that the weekend and free time is here for me to enjoy some quality time on PS and with your poetry..
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Susan, that was the feeling I wanted to create in the poem.. I think you might like my poem day I became a poet.. Hope you have time to read it..
Warrior Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Back to congrats!!! my Silent Friend...the Angels are with you...stay in the light...^WW^
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Thank you WW..
Wanter Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 10:56 AM
She was an angel allright! No human could stir such a write. Congratulations!
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Sunlite..
May Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Great write Silent.. Congrats on POTD
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations! Gorgeous piece my friend. xomo!
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thank you Mo..
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Returning with congrats on poem of the day Silent One.
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Swartz Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Wonderful poem SO. Perfectly penned. Congratulations on POTD!
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Thank you..
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:47 AM
- A deeply sensitive poem, S.O. - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Thank you..
Downing  Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Congrats on your potd... hugs :)
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Thank you Kina..
Pett Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations on POTD S.O. this is an amazing piece of poetry, evoked so many emotions while reading, exceptional a fave for me. :))
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Thank you Roy..
Gondolf Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 5:12 AM
What a beautiful, sensual, romantic piece, SO, congrats on POTD. John
One Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Thank you John,..
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