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Angelic Appetite

Gorgeous gobbledygook in a babe’s mouth — masticates with angelic appetite. From your mouth to his hearty-grumbling ear, the stomach of his mind chews up the light, spits out uncomprehended-oatmeal curd, but favors the cadence of rolling tongue. The surge of warmth in the sound of “Ma-ma,” and often the playful silliness, strung on a baby’s beads, tickle the tired lead. Like an emaciated bear, he points to the people and things he longs to pop in his potato-famine mouth. His joints well-oiled, never spoiled - the silver spoons’ croon. He tastes the bittersweet of maturity. Hears the crude erupting sounds in their vowels, ferocious consonants - he chants with glee. He knows not the shock value but learns quick by the unhinged jaw drop of his mentor. Did they think he would not repeat such pluck? He spits out appleseeds - wormy encore. 7/31/2021 Anything You Want Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke
*Pluck - guts, nerve, fortitude or persistance (definitions.net)
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. A cute picture. Love your line "He spits out appleseeds - wormy encore." Have a blessed day...............
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Agustin Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting from the start til the end; even the photo complements and compliments this. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:39 PM
A true pleasure to have read your precious posey, Kim, defining your ingenuity with such imagery, my compliments truly on your righteous placement my friend, Aloha!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Aloha, William! Thank you :)
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:15 PM
what a sweet poem in so many ways Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Jan! xx
Alex Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Wow! Such a great write! Congratulations on your selection.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 10:42 PM
This is angelic indeed. Loved your imagery, Kim. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 5:24 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 7:47 PM
So entertaining Kim! "he points to the people and things he longs to pop in his potato-famine mouth." Loved this part!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Caren!
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