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Written, January 11, 2015

~1st Place~
Contest: Cross-Your Interpretation
Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire
Judged: 03/03/2019

~1st Place~
Contest: Destiny Or Choices
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Judged: 04/19/2016

~1st Place~
Contest: Second Chance #2
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 04/16/2016


For "Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic Poetry Contest"
Sponsor, Sotto Poet,

March 11, 2024

 

"And so it is, that both the Devil and the angelic Spirit present us with objects of desire to awaken our power of choice. There is an invisible strength within us; when it recognizes two opposing objects of desire, it grows stronger." ( Rumi)
The Narrow Line There are divisions on life’s narrow line where paths on left unite with paths on right. Those crossroads we encounter, intertwine; must choose which way- and oft, by dark of night. On left, perhaps the Devil’s wish we turn; on right, a path more blessed by God we find. The choice can lose the soul with no return, or help it rise to happiness refined. With God and Devil, we must live our years; the balance is an act we face each day. At times, the narrow line is blurred by fears; go right, go left- a choice to make and pray- the one we choose will be a soulful quest; our only judge- a conscience well at rest.

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Date: 5/21/2020 12:42:00 AM
This is such a different take on the theme so beautifully blended with experiences. Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 4:17:00 PM
A very nice entry for my contest, thanks Sandra, and congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:54:00 AM
Sandra, CONGRATS on your well-deserved first-place win! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/4/2019 8:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/4/2019 12:14:00 AM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Sandra :) - "The word cross can mean many things", it's really true :) - So many different suggestions :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/4/2019 8:07:00 PM
Yes, many different ways to interpret 'cross' in this contest. Thanks again for your visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2019 4:12:00 PM
Its wonderful to read this gem again Sandra, many congrats on your top place:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/4/2019 8:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2019 3:02:00 PM
Many congratulations,Sandra. This was a thought-provoking and as usual beautifully flowing poem.
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy, for your lovely comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2019 1:47:00 PM
VEry insightful and well written poem, Sandra. Congrats on top win.
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/3/2019 1:21:00 PM
Wonderfully presented, Sandra! Congrats!
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, James, for your visit and supportive comment! Sandra
Date: 3/3/2019 12:21:00 PM
The choices we make in life are our own and too often people don't accept responsibility. As you suggest, I pray for guidance and know each of us has to live with our own conscience. Perfect sonnet form, Sandra, and a great first-place win! I still have your address, but send me a Soup mail to help me determine what prize to send to you. Congratulations! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carolyn, for another fine contest and for my wonderful placement. I am pleased that you find my poem worthy. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/10/2016 12:44:00 PM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/8/2016 7:54:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 2:17:00 PM
Great Sandra! Congratulations for your win! Well deserved. :)
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 12:17:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations, wonderful!
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darren! Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra, the proverbial fork in the road decision faced by us all, well written...
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for your visit, congrats and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, this contest brought out some poems with wisdom and it is nice to read such poetry for me
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic, for your congratulations in uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 11/7/2016 8:42:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win great write! Hugs eve
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Date: 11/8/2016 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/20/2016 10:04:00 AM
You speak the truth sweet Sandra and it shines...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:39:00 AM
What a great poem, Sandra. I love how you depict this great truth. Congrats on your placement. Agnes
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Date: 4/28/2016 12:10:00 AM
Sandra, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:50:00 AM
Greetings Sandra. Congrats for your top placement with this fine piece!!! I also love the quote above!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/26/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Teddy, for your supportive comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 6:38:00 PM
Love the last line Sandra. The proof is in the resting of a clear head on the pillow and going to sleep peacefully.
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Date: 4/26/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, John, for stopping by with your nice comment. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 3:21:00 PM
Thank you again, BL, for your support! Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 7:25:00 AM
Congrats on the placement Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. Sandra
Date: 4/19/2016 10:20:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome first place win dear Sandra.. seven for this!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your uplifting comment and support! Hugs, Sandra
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