Angelic

I wonder, if glass-winged venus of psalms, Shed soft serenades on chirping bird's nest, Would alpha centauri's edenic balms Coat my saturn-sage skin with glacial crest? Maybe, my turquoise-ink's tomb is ablaze, In lazuline embers of universe, Tracing fluorescence of rose on heart's phase, As sycamores in midnight's metaverse Moors of love echo, 'bonjour, heaven-blend", Draped in opal peonies and mauve fog, As hope-rings of gold, shine in healing's mend, And I rise in starworld of fairy's vogue I revolve around mermaid-moon's beacon, For serendipity in mortal scars, Like twilight's arc, in sunsets of saffron, Embraced zenith, as an angelic star I'm an earthling-ash of pearl's poesy, Ephemeral as strokes of blushed bluesy.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:37:00 PM

Hiya, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2023 6:53:00 AM

Interesting lines penned in this one. Those opal peonies must be a beautiful site. I enjoyed reading this one today. Your creativity shines through. Your visits to my page are always so refreshing. Sara

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 7:57:00 AM

Hiya your amazing marriage of words and phrases is beyond all esteem I could bestow. A simple poet, such as I, am lost for words to praise your supreme poem. May I offer best wishes and adoration of your obvious talent.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2023 5:50:00 AM

I am elated to have the opportunity to immerse myself in the refined artistry of your poetry. The imagery you employ is truly exceptional, evoking a profound sense of wonder within me as I traverse your lines. Additionally, your choice of language adds an additional layer of beauty to this already exquisite poem. I appreciate the evocative and stirring manner in which you start with a question. My heartfelt congratulations to you, on a well-deserved win and please try my contest prompt as well.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/22/2023 6:17:00 AM

Oh, I certainly have participated in your wonderful 'Creative Writing' contest with my poem 'Heart's Slumber'- I've entered with this poem! Thank you wholeheartedly for such splendid and beautifully honouring words. Truly grateful for your in-depth analysis always, this inspires and encourages me.. Your kindness is precious.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/22/2023 12:13:00 AM

Such vulnerability flowing throughout your lines, so much depth in those words woven in sheer eloquence. I love mermaid moons, and saffron sunsets and so much more and your chosen rhymes are brilliant and so captivating like magical dust upon my eyes/ i cant help but admire the way you’ve started the poem with a question, so evocative and heart touching. Congratulations my angelic star u surely are an angel. And this prompt suits u perfectly

Valsa George

Date: 8/21/2023 7:20:00 PM

Your diction is simply superb. So happy that I get a chance to read such elegant poetry ! Your imagery is exquisite ! It is with a sense of awe that I read your lines. I cannot rise above my simple versification. Congratulations Hiya.

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/21/2023 11:24:00 AM

A very well written poem Hiya. Some great lines. Very poetic. I especially like the last two lines. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes to you on your poetic journey.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/21/2023 10:31:00 AM

Wel penned beautiful poem. Great language and imagery, welcome to soup.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/21/2023 9:12:00 AM

The imagery and poetic language in your poetry are exquisite. So happy friends of Inky are coming with her to Poetry Soup. Welcome! I look forward to getting to know you through your lovely poetry. A poet friend (to be) in Texas, Bill