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Angelic or Abandoned Word Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France ~ August 20, 2023

"When I hear an angelic voice whispering in my ear, my fears and worries disappear." ~ by poet Angels could outshine moonlight, I've been told Joyously, they sing praises all night long Divine serenade 'til the sky turns gold Angelic voices raised in revered song Heavenly seraphs, nobly clad in white Myriads strong, humbly mesmerizing I'd be privileged to behold the sight Bowing low before the Day Star rising Treasured gift if I were allowed to hear Solemn, I'd stand, not whispering a sound In lyrical chorus, their timbre clear Guardian angels, hovering around In the presence of this celestial choir, Faith would be rekindled like flames of fire.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:23:00 PM

Line, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest I love the image and quote, Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2023 10:34:00 AM

- Congratulations with this lovely Angelic poem, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2023 10:39:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise for finding this one to your liking.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2023 1:57:00 PM

Your "Angelic" is a wonderful/beautiful ~ write/quote/picture. "Love It" Have a blessed/great day............

Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2023 2:00:00 PM

I'm very pleased you enjoyed it, Paul. Thank you.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/21/2023 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Love the imagery and metaphors.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2023 1:59:00 PM

I'm delighted with both of your comments. Thanks so much, Jay.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/20/2023 4:30:00 PM

What a beautiful sonnet, Lin. You've truly captured the presence of guardian angels in our lives. While recently healing from surgery, I had an angel visit me regularly at night. It gave me peace and calmed me despite the rather intense pain. I ramble...sorry. I love the imagery and metaphors and your creativity. Enjoy your day, Sara Etgen-Baker

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 4:35:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sara. You’re not rambling when you write about your experience. Please feel free to do so anytime. I’m sorry you suffered such pain and faith helped you endure it. What a wonderful witness of their existence.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2023 1:34:00 PM

My good friend, this is truly a glowing beauty. Poetry and picture sets the mood, the scene of Heavenly travels into a most bright and glorified sky. A definitive fav for me. A gem this is. God bless.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 3:26:00 PM

Thank you sincerely, Robert. I appreciate your thoughts.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2023 11:32:00 AM

With your exquisite poem and meticulously picked lexicon, Lin, your writing is reminiscent of a literary luminary. Profound and thought-provoking, this composition is adorned with a plethora of striking metaphors. Imbued with beauty and inspiration, best of luck in the contest.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 3:25:00 PM

Your remarks are all so wonderfully encouraging. Thanks very much, Lasaad.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2023 9:54:00 AM

So beautiful and uplifting Lin, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2023 3:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan. I’m glad you like it.