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"We can all be an angel to someone." By Poet I can still remember, the days of years gone by. We were so young and carefree, time did not exist for us. We loved life, and life loved us back. Years and time left us, left us standing still. Awakening one day to find all had changed, we were now old and frail. Your peach and cream skin has wrinkles, your brunet hair is now a pretty soft gray. One thing has not changed, your angelic personality, You were my angel the day we first met, today after all the years you are still my angelic angel.

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Date: 3/28/2024 1:17:00 PM
This is so very beautiful to read, congrats on your win Paula, Love
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2024 9:50:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" tribute write. Great memories are the best memories to have... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 3/28/2024 9:46:00 AM
Nice tribute to your beloved aunt and uncle. Loving feelings last forever. Congrats on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" tribute write. Your are so right, "loving feelings last forever." They were the best/best memories... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 3/28/2024 8:39:00 AM
"2 Place"  Angelic ~ Date Written: 8/20/2023 ~ NOTE: A tribute to my aunt/uncle. Married young. Lost a baby. I became like a daughter. Married over 50 years. Never had a fight. Now in heaven.
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Date: 3/15/2024 9:33:00 PM
love the take on the contest, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/17/2024 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Good hear from you. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 10/2/2023 2:48:00 PM
A very profound poem of love and respect for a much loved aunt and uncle Paula. Beautifully articulated with sensitivity and feelings of Love. Thank you for sharing your personal feelings of love and grief for those much loved and missed. They remain within us (in our love for them and memories), they visit us in our dreams and when we need them most. They are never far from us, though we sometimes think they are; they are always with us. Xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. It was great to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" tribute write. Great memories are the best part of life. True, they are always with us. They were an angel to me growing up. We can be an angel to someone. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 9/12/2023 5:43:00 PM
Paula, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I like the quote, Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write/quote. This was a tribute to my aunt/uncle. Married young/lost a baby. I was like a daughter to them. Married over 50 years/never had a fight/now in heaven. Thank You, for the contest/the placement means a lot. I needed a rest/back to writing again. We can be an angel to someone. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/23/2023 4:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful, tender, romantic poem Paula. Love conquers all! I agree - there’s an angel out there for everyone if we spread our wings to give to each other. Blessings to you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2023 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found my "Angelic" write to be beautiful/tender/romantic. Yes, there are many angels out in the world. We can be an angel to someone. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/23/2023 11:00:00 AM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2023 12:50:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back again. Glad you like my "Angelic" write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/23/2023 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations Ms. Paula. I don't think you are frail though, just seasoned. God bless. Nancy
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2023 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my true story about  my aunt/uncle. I enjoyed writing this "Angelic" write for them. They had true love. Have a blessed day writing away................... 
Date: 8/22/2023 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Paula! You are proving that there is true love. Hopeful!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "Angelic" write. They had true love. Not many find it. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/22/2023 3:23:00 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/22/2023 11:03:00 AM
Beautifully written Paula. So nice :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:16:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found my "Angelic" write beautifully written. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/22/2023 9:39:00 AM
"3 Place" ~ Angelic  ~ Date Written: 8/20/2023  ~ NOTE: A tribute to my aunt/uncle. Married young. Lost a baby. I became like a daughter. Married over 50 years. Never had a fight. Now in heaven.
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Date: 8/22/2023 7:55:00 AM
Alas we all have to go through the process of getting old. Yet most important the love of a family will always be remembered.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:16:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you like my "Angelic" write. Yes, getting old is part of life. They were an amazing couple. I have never seen another couple like them. We will remember the good times in life. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/22/2023 3:59:00 AM
Awwn, how magical and heartwarming this is, angelic in all its essence.. The descriptions are full of beauty and the depth is heartfelt.. Inner gorgeousness and purity of the heart matters in the end.. Not the appearance.. Such a golden piece :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Your words were so kind. Thanks You.. You made my day. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/21/2023 5:23:00 PM
Simply beautiful.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found my "Angelic" write beautiful. It was written for two very beautiful people. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/21/2023 4:58:00 PM
Oh, this is a wonderful common theme in Life.. We may change externally.@amd tme takes it toll.. But the soulL continues to shine on … Pangie
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Yes, the soul does shine on. These were two very special people. Have a blessed day writing away..................
Date: 8/21/2023 12:50:00 PM
- The best time in life ... carefree ... and the feeling of being loved ... a lovely poem, Paula :) - (I choose the same word:) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:06:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my "Angelic" write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/21/2023 10:46:00 AM
Nice poem. Great to portray living Angels.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:15:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Yes, they were 2 living angels. I sure do miss them. Again one day I hope to see them. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/20/2023 11:35:00 AM
Paula, your writing is creative with its wonderful style and carefully selected wording. This piece is full of powerful metaphors, inspiring and lovely. Good luck in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my "Angelic" write. Your words are so very kind. Thank You... Today, my heart is smiling because of you. Have a blessed day writing away...................
Date: 8/20/2023 8:56:00 AM
Angelic  ~ Date Written: 8/20/2023 ~ NOTE: A tribute to my aunt/uncle. Married young. Lost a baby. I became like a daughter. Married over 50 years. Never had a fight. Now in heaven.
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