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Angelic or Abandoned Words Poetry Contest

First Place

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Where is the love you promised us always? Eternal love is cast out of heaven for the angelic it seems—Quote by poet It burns deeply knowing our ways of love aren’t angelic Love’s awe emerges then torn apart as old as a Christian relic It seems true that blessed love can only abide in its eternal among the angels above and only in the purest spirits We mortals find the gift of love can be difficult at best Echoing passions of no forevers with no peace or rest Awaiting parting and its end with such sweet sorrows Pink coral sunsets no longer signs of golden tomorrows To paraphrase Shakespeare’s sonnet, love which burns brightest tends to dim the quickest—coal rakes and it churns inside informing me that our ways of love are not angelic Just to discover true love is as rare as a lost and sacred relic

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Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:26:00 PM

Anaya, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the images and the quote, Constance

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/12/2023 5:59:00 PM

Oh Constance, I'm definitely delighted that you enjoyed the my work! I find pleasure in your challenges. Thank you! Anaya

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/3/2023 11:40:00 PM

True love is rare and next to impossible..-It's as rare as a lost and sacred relic,loved how you described it A fantastic poem

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/5/2023 11:01:00 AM

Like Arlo says, a faulty virtue in humans, Charmaine. I enjoyed the work I put into this one, eternal love always a favorite amongst brilliant poets as you! ;)

Christina Bowring

Date: 8/28/2023 10:19:00 AM

This is heavenly, divine Anaya. Beautiful. Incredibly well written. Flows so well and it is so thought provoking. So many gorgeous lines. I love it. High praise and appreciation to you. Thank you for sharing. Blessings.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/30/2023 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Christina! xhugsx ~Anaya

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2023 10:41:00 AM

- Congratulations with this beautiful heavenly Angelic poem, Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/23/2023 9:54:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! xhugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/23/2023 9:07:00 AM

Anaya, CONGRATS on your win with this skillfully-written, expressive piece that takes a realistic look at love. Janice

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/23/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/22/2023 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 5:28:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Glad you enjoyed, have a nice day!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/22/2023 7:18:00 AM

So good to see your poem a number one with its stark realism that love is often messy, troubled. Syrupy tributes to love that paint an angelic view are common. Your writing consistently has an original hue. Congratulations! Brian

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 4:40:00 PM

Thank you, Brian! I really like that, original hue-it's nice to have a style and actually make the list, and if there is a time I hit a home run with a 1st place win, then better is the encouragement. Thank you again for yours!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/22/2023 5:56:00 AM

Back with heartfelt congratulations on your top contest win, with this so lovely poem.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 4:37:00 PM

Thank you S.P.! I can't keep up with most here, your poetry divine and so worthy of wins, I am just happy to have made the list! xhugs ~Anaya

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/21/2023 3:12:00 AM

"Pink coral sunsets no longer signs of golden tomorrow's", " True love is as rare as a lost and sacred relic" Oh wow, what an entrancing and heartfelt take for the contest.. With such aching and soul stirring descriptions, weaving melancholy.. Ah, so beautifully done, love this!

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, Hiya! I'll have to check yours, your poetry is divine! ;)

The Situation

Date: 8/20/2023 3:18:00 PM

I put together the ideals no marriage in heaven and God will wipe away every tear. when i think of angelic But surely there must be love there.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 4:34:00 PM

God is love and I believe we are one with God, the energy, the source, the three-flame fold-whatever you call God-God is love. Human love is work to keep alive!

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/20/2023 12:11:00 PM

True love is equal parts broken and exalted; never consistent in poetic address. A faulty virtue in humans. :o)

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/22/2023 3:55:00 PM

A faulty virtue in humans indeed. But they say love can move mountains!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2023 5:39:00 PM

The exquisite imagery in your poem, Anaya, evokes a profound sense of reality's influence on the angelic motif, thereby enriching and imbuing the entire composition with poignant human veracity. Your words, my friend, exude a remarkable authenticity and verity that is sorely lacking in much of contemporary poetry. Good luck with the contest.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/19/2023 7:47:00 PM

Im delighted you found my thoughts genuine, and that you found the imagery exquisite, S.P. thank you for your kind words. Anaya

Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/19/2023 5:23:00 PM

A fave for me. Anaya Like so poems are beautifully penned, rude awakenings can often be revealed in regard to the human condition. Good show, well done, Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/19/2023 7:39:00 PM

Robert, I'm grateful that you found it favorable! Thank you.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/19/2023 3:20:00 PM

Its so true! Everlasting pure unadulterated eternally blissful love between humans, seems totally whimsical. Two people with their own ideas, their own desires, their own weaknesses being a perfect match with each other, from the onset of love to the "til death us do part" bit, is admittedly questionable. Such realism in your words dear friend. Poetry needs more realism and truth. Well done. Life just isn't all angels, and sugarplums BOL A fave from me.

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/19/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hey, lady poetess it's good to see you! I was just telling David that I hope someone can prove me wrong. You make perfect sense Wen! Ha ha you are making me smile! ;D Thank you!

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/19/2023 3:08:00 PM

Beautiful imagery above and within your poem Anaya, I sense reality’s darkness overcoming the angelic theme, which enhances, and adds human truth to the whole poem for this mere mortal, brilliant, cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 8/19/2023 3:21:00 PM

Aren't they lovely? I love them, click on the right on the image, like I showed you, many to choose from. I feel a romantic vibe going around. My beliefs ring true, it seems human love is not forever and we are in denial that we are truly attached, just hope someone can prove me wrong. lol Thank you, David! Cheers!

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Angelic or Abandoned Words Poetry Contest

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