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The angel said, "Show her how you care!" But the devil produced a lewd stare In just a while She gave a smile A happy her pappy didn't share!

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Date: 3/26/2018 9:36:00 AM
interesting twist - you have the most unique ideas, pat!
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Date: 3/26/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thanks! I'll take unique over weird any day!!......80)
Date: 3/25/2018 5:52:00 PM
Funny, equating the potential suitor as the devil, and typical dad reaction. Nice limerick, Pat.
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Date: 3/26/2018 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Caren with a c!!