Angel Versus Devil

The angel said, "Show her how you care!"
But the devil produced a lewd stare
In just a while
She gave a smile
A happy her pappy didn't share!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:36 AM
interesting twist - you have the most unique ideas, pat!
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Thanks! I'll take unique over weird any day!!......80)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Funny, equating the potential suitor as the devil, and typical dad reaction. Nice limerick, Pat.
Adams Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank you Caren with a c!!
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