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Angel On My Doorstep-True Story

An Angel, came in human form. Arrived at my house about noon. I knew he had a spirit, for he was  past any norm. And my keen, mystical soul, was right with him in tune. We chatted for just a bit... The uniqueness of his spirit showed. I did not want him to ever leave or quit. For as I ascertained, I was in a most heavenly zone. Suddenly, I looked down, and the startled to see the that Angel had but one leg! It quite startled me, greatly because he had such great agility. I was at a loss for words when he told me he was more than grateful? To say that I was astonished, is to meet him goes beyond anything fateful. He was perhaps but twenty-five, at most, I gathered as he related. A great wife and two children and seeking a job was he, which all three he celebrated. The story goes a drunk driver, ten years ago hit him and there went his leg. But to him, it was a night with gratitude he celebrated. He made me look at my life here at the Soup. I should be grateful and elated! But my ego crushes me, with few comments I feel diminished, and yes deflated. Now here was an Angel, who told me, he ran obstacle courses around the world!! And here I was, thinking at Poetry Soup feeling all deflated. He stood with one leg in contrast like a magnificent,glowing emerald! I never came here to be famous or seeking any poetic glory. It took an Angel with but one leg, To remind me to stop sniveling and groaning. To seek to give, not have others listen to my insipid, selfish moanings.     September 3, 2020        5:30am PST * Requestiing positive responses, no  discussion on drinking, please*

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Date: 9/5/2020 8:30:00 AM
You meet these "angels" in the most unlikely places. I met one while waiting to have blood drawn one day; she exuded love and compassion. She was just a patient herself, but you know them when you meet them. Well written piece, from the heart.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/5/2020 12:08:00 PM
Its breathtaking to meet them! So glad you got to meet one...wow...while having blood drawn! I have had a few as friends in my life, too. Really have lived a blessed life.... Love,Pangie.xxx
Date: 9/3/2020 1:50:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Pangie! Kept me rapt to the end. Angels are all about us whether we believe in them or not! Bob
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Date: 9/3/2020 2:04:00 PM
Howdy, Bob~ hope all is well with you. I am don en from writing and posting 5 poems last night. Ugh. I believe in them but never met one at my door. He also works with the police helping handicapped kids. He was a lesson in gratitude, Pangie xx Hey! Thanks for visiting.
Date: 9/3/2020 12:32:00 PM
An amazing man Panagiota, there is more to life than a few comments or not on here. Youre here for you and no one else, just think the whole world can see your poetry. Remember my advice. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/3/2020 12:50:00 PM
Oh, Tom! Those poor folks who are stuck reading my poetry. ROFLMAO. You are more than accurate on the comments or lack thereof.))) if you reread the last two paragraphs, you will see I learned my lesson from the Angel. You and I have discussed the comments issue more than once! And I have written about it. In conclusion..,TO GOD BE THE GLORY..NOT ME. Love, Pangie xx
Date: 9/3/2020 5:36:00 AM
An amazing write my friend deep with thought!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/3/2020 5:43:00 AM
Hi Bobby~ he was something else. His face glowed with love of life. Zowie! That, I don't know how to put in words. He had Bermuda shorts on and that silver prosthesis with a sapphire colored knee joint. He works with our city police too helping handicapped kids. Running obstacle courses..gee... Thanks Bobby. Bless you... Pangie xx

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