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Angel of Arctic Moonrise

This poem is a special devotion for my mother, who has always been a healing sun for these wintry eyes. Mumma, you're my hope, my strength, my magic and my heartbeat. I'll always find my fairy-lights in your soul, as you're my home, where this child will always return after playing with solemn sunsets. Happy birthday to you.. "Mum, you are a barbie q u e e n, for this fruity fairy, as we t r a c e watermelon skies, fluttering around the k i w i moon, concocting i c y peach elixirs from shiny shawls of cashmere l u n a r beams" As we both snorkel with crystal fins of clarity, in turquoise seas of the marine edens, waving to the watercolor spirits of dusky nymphs, our souls sing in the ocean's heart, encasing solemn sighs in conch shells, that got lost within sirens of aquamarine. Evermore, liberated beyond the haze of sepia gulfs that chained us, beneath ~ timeless tapestries, we trail footprints of cherished lilies in mauve hail, falling upon sandy shorelines. I'm a baby blossom,  resting upon emerald sepals, of her crimson elegance; my cherry lips spin seafoam spells,  for you ~ my red diamond swan, flying with pistachio feathers. Can you hear my heartbeats, throbbing beneath the pillow of pink roses, sewn with the fragrance of your pearly ardour, mumma?  I'm a daughter of an Angel, whose cape of arctic moonrise, swathes every aching eye, with milky light of cosmic faith. She spreads a carpet of aliferous Auroras, allowing my tears to dance on its feathery peacock wings. She's the lifeline of constellations, which twinkle like kins of the wayfinder's galaxy. She's more than a bejeweled brushstroke of Van Gogh, ribboned with strawberry stars, smeared with fairy-glow of divinity. Inhaling comets of creamy compassion, she's a warrior with dahlia sword, melting every jade eye's evil aroma, to buttery flakes of symphonic soothe. I no longer search for oceanic archangels, for I've found my healing home, in her sunflower dreams. She's the vanilla warmth for the aching Himalayan snow, a glare of peaceful amulets for shivering life, and the sweetest melody of sugarplum sonatas; mumma, you are my seventh heaven. Carving the saga, of a celestial Queen and her princess, eclectic epitaphs will harmonize in ethereal hymns of rhapsody, knitted by a cosmic mother for her raspberry sapling. You'll always be that last zephyr of cathartic mantras, which will envelop my heartbeats in hydrangea hues.

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Date: 2/17/2024 5:36:00 PM
You have purely described your mum in phrases that are so expensive and heavenly significant. Mothers deserve to be praised for such heroic displays of power and love. They show it like it doesn't cost a sweat. Blessings and balloons. Lovely craft Hiya.
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Date: 2/16/2024 10:59:00 AM
All these gorgeous metaphors are so befitting for a lovely tribute for your mother and for every mother who cares for her child more than herself always.. I am so glad I got to read this touching tribute, full of exquisite imagery and meaningful metaphors for your mother on her special day.. you two seem to have a wonderful bond MashaALLAH. Sending you both love and light!!
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Date: 2/11/2024 10:42:00 AM
Those first few lines are so enticing with their fruitiness! Vanilla warmth for the aching Himalayan snow… sugarplum sonatas… envelop my heartbeats in hydrangea hues…This is what poetry expounds! Well done!
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Date: 2/10/2024 12:21:00 PM
A beautiful and touching dedication to your mum.. It is a beautifully crafted tribute to her, celebrating her with vivid imagery, emotional depth, and a profound sense of gratitude and admiration... It is rich in vivid imagery and symbolism, painting a picture of maternal love and devotion through nature-inspired metaphors. The use of elements like watermelon skies, kiwi moons, and crystal fins evoke a sense of enchantment and wonder, while also conveying the deep emotional connection..
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Silent One
Date: 2/10/2024 12:22:00 PM
There is nothing like a mothers love and this explores themes of healing, transformation, and spiritual growth, highlighting the transformative power of maternal love and the profound impact it has on the speaker's life. Through the nurturing presence of the mother, the speaker finds solace, strength, and a sense of belonging, transcending earthly struggles and finding sanctuary in her love.
Date: 2/9/2024 10:17:00 AM
This is the most intense tribute I think I have every read. Your poetry is for the mind what limoncello is to our taste. I have to take time after reading a work such as this to just take in the complete and utter feeling you created. I also wish to say that you have the character to recognize what your mom does for you and put it into this form. It's an ode to both of you.
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Date: 2/9/2024 5:19:00 AM
Hiya….what an amazing poem full of such love, admiration and respect for your very special beautiful mum! Its apparent your bond is so powerful. You are both blessed to have each other…..Has your mum read this? I bet she will be overcome with emotion and pride Hiya reading such a loving tribute of appreciation! Debx
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Date: 2/7/2024 11:12:00 PM
This is an extremely gorgeous dedication poem and gift to your mum especially on her special day my dear poet friend Hiya. I'm also sending my warm Happy Birthday greetings to your mum. Wishing her all the best. Thank you so much for sharing this. Loving this so much. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:16:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your Mum on her birthday Hiya, and a big birthday wish from me too. She must be so pleased to have such a lovely daughter like yourself who is so devoted to her. Hugs
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:30:00 PM
A lovely written Happy Birthday tribute poem to your mumma, Hiya. Touching the way your imagery paints a picture of strength and love. May you both share love and strength for years to come. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 2/6/2024 7:48:00 PM
"You no longer search for oceanic archangels, for you've found your healing home in her sunflower dreams." Such a beautiful tribute to your Mom, Wonderful write
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Date: 2/6/2024 5:20:00 PM
ahhh, such a heartfelt and loving tribute to your mother!! Your loved flowed through each line and within your lovely imagery. I was left breathless and in awe of your creativity and soulful expression. I especially liked: I no longer search for oceanic archangels, for I've found my healing home, in her sunflower dreams. She's the vanilla warmth...your words evoke both senses and emotions...a loving masterpiece! have a great evening, dear Hiya! hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/6/2024 12:33:00 PM
This is love: ..."Evermore, liberated beyond the haze of sepia gulfs that chained us, beneath ~ timeless tapestries, we trail footprints of cherished lilies in mauve hail, falling upon sandy shorelines. I'm a baby blossom, resting upon emerald sepals, of her crimson elegance; my cherry lips spin seafoam spells, for you ~ my red diamond swan, flying with pistachio feathers...you are my seventh heaven..." So utterly beautiful, this poem
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:39:00 AM
Poem indicates the obvious; you have a wonderful mother. Poem sang a love song to the heavens. Let your mother know that I wish her a Happy Birthday.
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:17:00 AM
Dear Hiya, your poem is magnificent. It is a heartfelt tribute that emanates from the depths of your being, expressed with grace and gratitude. I admire the seamless flow of metaphors and the profound sincerity in your words. The use of poetic techniques further enhances the touching sentiments conveyed in this piece. Your mother is an exquisite soul, known for her kindness and selflessness, and I feel privileged to have the pleasure of knowing her as well.
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Date: 2/6/2024 8:33:00 AM
I admire your mother, a pillar of strength. Great poem studded with imagery and metaphors.
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:20:00 AM
Reads like you loved your mom very much and she instilled in you some creativity and artistic gifts. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:09:00 AM
This poem is so heartfelt-- a magnificent tribute emanating from deep within-- in words of grace and gratitude. A precious gift from you Hiya--your mother will cherish forever.--I'm a daughter of an Angel, whose cape of arctic moonrise, swathes every aching eye--She's the lifeline of constellations--- You'll always be that last zephyr of cathartic mantras, which will envelop my heartbeats in hydrangea hues---superb! Absolutely a FAVE!!
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Date: 2/6/2024 5:26:00 AM
I absolutely love everything about this poem and you and your mom share such a special and soul warming bond that i admire so very much. I love the flow of your metaphors and how sincere and heartfelt your words are here, your use of poetic techniques and the depth of what youv delivered here truly is touching! Your mother is a beautiful soul so kind and selfless, and i am grateful to know her too, i wish her a beautiful birthday, and what more can a mother wish for? Besides their childs wish
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Date: 2/6/2024 5:30:00 AM
And prayers ribboned with love! Heres to wishing her many more years of love and happiness. I hope she knows what an amaZing mother she is. And what a caring soul too she is. sending you both light always. Happy birthday to your mom.
Date: 2/6/2024 4:59:00 AM
Sweet tribute to mumma. She's your angel to guide your footsteps. I wasn't close to mine but I got to see her before she died in October. I was glad she got to witness my dad and I reconcile after 30 years estrangement before she passed. Anyway, this is about you. My wife is close to her mumma too, though 6,000 miles apart. Have a nice week Hiya
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Date: 2/6/2024 4:35:00 AM
-This emotional poem is filled with beautiful love, Hiya - "She's the lifeline of constellations, which twinkle like kins of the wayfinder's galaxy" ... - Right now I wish my mother was alive - hugs
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Date: 2/6/2024 4:32:00 AM
Oh Gosh Hiya, you belong in the archaic world, one that has nothing but untouched beauty in it, A Fav for me, you had me at Mother ! xo
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/6/2024 6:29:00 AM
Awwn, beautiful Rose, your precious compliments always bring me immense joy, thank you so much for your graceful presence.. You have a magical heart :) Thank you so much, for the fav too, always!!
Date: 2/6/2024 4:24:00 AM
"She's the vanilla warmth for the aching Himalayan snow, a glare of peaceful amulets for shivering life, and the sweetest melody of sugarplum sonatas; mumma, you are my seventh heaven." What more does a mother need on her birthday to rejoice! Reading this splendidly beautiful dedication to your sweet mother, I have goosebumps all over me...... ! How proud and happy she must be to have such a gifted, devoted and loving daughter..... ! In my life, I have always longed for a daughter. Though my sons are precious, still I miss a girl child. "I'm a baby blossom, resting upon emerald sepals, of her crimson elegance; my cherry lips spin seafoam spells, for you ~" Hiya, you have blossomed into a beautiful flower shedding fragrance and have become the pride and envy of many! Into my FAVE
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/6/2024 6:27:00 AM
Awwn, beautiful poetess, firstly, your comment deeply warmed my heart and filled my soul with tears of gratitude. I can feel the sincerity of your soulfully appreciative words and truthfully, I'm lacking appropriate adjectives and words to describe how your kindness is a true blessing! Yes, I've a very special bond with my parents as I'm their single child..and especially, my mum is truly my heartbeat.. Thank you so much for seeing in between the lines of my poem and honouring me with these delightful words. You're one of my most favorite poetic souls and friend here :) Immensely grateful for your presence. Sending fairy magic and lots of love to you!!!

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