Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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Angel Love

Angel Love

There is a rose named angel face,
In lavender she blooms with grace.
When I admire her sweet splendor
I recall your love so tender

Keeping watchful eyes over me,
And answering with love my plea 
For your help, when I am in need,
Contrasting miracles indeed!

Though unseen, I feel your presence
In aura of Divine essence.
My soul yearns to meet you in kind
So grateful you can read my mind;

Lift my burdens, leave shoulders bare,
I could not live without your care.
What a blessing you are to me!
You have my love eternally.

8-15-18

~9th Place~Premiere Contest Winner

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Vladislav Raven October 27, 2018 at 8:47 AM Hi Connie, a much deserved win in the contest. Congratulations. A rose to sing within the heart indeed. Your soft words paint such a living image. It is a great pleasure to read this peace. You are a true wordsmith Connie. Your words always manage to touch my emotions. Such a lovely read this afternoon. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Connie Marcum Wong October 27, 2018 at 12:57 PM Thank you so much Mike. I love your poetry too. It always inspires me. xxoo : )

Lisa Ricci September 15, 2018 at 6:34 AM Good Morning Connie. I turned to this entry because of your lovely title. Your words are as soft and lovely as the title to match. The image is exquisite. Your rhyme was never forced. And the line "I could not live without your care" says it all and so describes your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well. Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2018 at 5:10 PM Thank you for your lovely insightful comment Lisa. I wish I could comment on your poems but comments are turned off. Please know I am enjoying reading them. Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

CayCay Godwin August 25, 2018 at 10:07 PM So sweet and sincere, I was touched. And, again, crisp, flowing rhymes that engage the reader. A delightful poem, also uplifting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2018 at 11:21 PM You are catching up on all my poems and here I am just now getting online. I have been on the phone all day with daugh, sister, and friends. When it rains....thank you! : )

Charlie Smith August 23, 2018 at 3:58 PM You really do love angels, well done Connie, congratulations... Connie Marcum Wong August 23, 2018 at 4:49 PM Thank you Charlie. Whenever I ask for help they respond. ; )

Lyric Man August 20, 2018 at 6:54 PM Connie, your poem is as beautiful as an Angel Rose and a well deserved winner in the recent contest! Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2018 at 7:32 PM Thank you much Dave. I adore angels and the help they freely give me. : )

Mystic Rose Rose August 18, 2018 at 7:16 PM No greater love then benign love that comes from above, Well written and heart felt dear poetess. Thanks for sharing. Have a great evening Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2018 at 2:14 PM Thank you very much for your lovely comment Pixie. It is much appreciated! : ) xxoo

Jack Horne August 18, 2018 at 10:20 AM love this, Connie - beautiful writing, as ever - & what a lovely flower Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2018 at 2:15 PM I agree Jack. I have that rose, tho I got the photo from the internet. Thank you! : )

Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 4:34 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2018 at 7:27 PM soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2018 at 7:25 PM Oh finally I am seeing this one. Sorry I have been too busy . I did not even notice I had not read your angel poem yet, let alone congratulate you. THat was a well deserved win, Connie.

Robert L. Hinshaw August 17, 2018 at 3:28 PM Congrats for your win, Connie - also for being named on the Top Contest Poets list for the past 6 months. I too am a great believer in angels - bob

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2018 at 12:42 PM The photo of this rose is almost as breathtaking as your poetic tribute to it, Connie. Congratulations on your win! There is a gemstone called "angelite" that is similar in color to this rose. Thank you for our conversation. Love, Carolyn

Jerry T Curtis August 17, 2018 at 8:33 AM I heard " A picture is worth a thousand words" But I say "A poem is worth a thousand pictures" ---at least yours are. Well done Connie God Bless

Pashang Salehi August 17, 2018 at 3:25 AM Beautifully done ... deservedly so...

Viv Wigley August 17, 2018 at 2:04 AM How lovely, Connie, much enjoyed. Congrats! Viv x

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 17, 2018 at 1:57 AM Congratulations, Connie on your win.

Gary Smith August 16, 2018 at 4:17 PM A lovely flowing poem Connie, congrats :)

Francesca Pappadogiannis August 16, 2018 at 1:11 PM Congrats my friend. A truly poetic and lovely piece of poetry. I loved the simile with the lavender rose especially. It has always been a colour that's stood out as a higher essence to me. :)

Janice Canerdy August 16, 2018 at 12:13 PM Beautiful poem! CONGRATS, Connie! Janice

Emile Pinet August 16, 2018 at 12:05 PM Congratulations Connie, your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Angels" contest. Very well done my friend, it was a hard contest to judge, Emile. Connie Marcum Wong August 16, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thank you very much Emile. You certainly must have struggled over judging this contest. You had so many wonderful entries. I am delighted to have made it onto your short winner's list! Thank you my friend. : )

Vijay Pandit August 16, 2018 at 7:12 AM Reads like a prayer ..comforting ...divine...well done Connie.

Vladislav Raven August 16, 2018 at 5:42 AM Hi Connie, you touch the soul with this truly wonderful write. What grace and peace your words bring as they sing so gently into the heart. The angels touch you every day. They lift your heart so you can write your excellent words that we all read. I love the content of this exceptional piece. This angelic gem goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Caren Krutsinger August 15, 2018 at 7:53 PM I am a big angel believer, and so this poem calls to all the parts of my heart that are in touch with my own angels. So nicely built, and pure, Connie.

Arturo Michael August 15, 2018 at 7:36 PM Just sweet as can be...A lovely write...All the best Connie

Winged Warrior August 15, 2018 at 7:19 PM Their love stretches far beyond eternity...and they have touched your heart as they have mine...an Angelic entry my dear Connie...a Fav from me and the Angels...Love & the Angels light...^WW^ Connie Marcum Wong August 16, 2018 at 12:35 AM Thank you so much WW, especially for the fave. It means a lot to me when someone faves one of my poems. I have angels in every room. : )

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