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Angel Love

Angel Love

There is a rose named angel face,
In lavender she blooms with grace.
When I admire her sweet splendor
I recall your love so tender

Keeping watchful eyes over me,
And answering with love my plea 
For your help, when I am in need,
Contrasting miracles indeed!

Though unseen, I feel your presence
In aura of Divine essence.
My soul yearns to meet you in kind
So grateful you can read my mind;

Lift my burdens, leave shoulders bare,
I could not live without your care.
What a blessing you are to me!
You have my love eternally.

8-15-18

~9th Place~Premiere Contest Winner

Copyright © Connie Marcum Wong | Year Posted 2018

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Vladislav Raven Date: 10/27/2018 8:47:00 AM Hi Connie, a much deserved win in the contest. Congratulations. A rose to sing within the heart indeed. Your soft words paint such a living image. It is a great pleasure to read this peace. You are a true wordsmith Connie. Your words always manage to touch my emotions. Such a lovely read this afternoon. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/27/2018 12:57:00 PM Thank you so much Mike. I love your poetry too. It always inspires me. xxoo : )

Lisa Ricci Date: 9/15/2018 6:34:00 AM Good Morning Connie. I turned to this entry because of your lovely title. Your words are as soft and lovely as the title to match. The image is exquisite. Your rhyme was never forced. And the line "I could not live without your care" says it all and so describes your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/15/2018 5:10:00 PM Thank you for your lovely insightful comment Lisa. I wish I could comment on your poems but comments are turned off. Please know I am enjoying reading them. Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

CayCay Jennings Date: 8/25/2018 10:07:00 PM So sweet and sincere, I was touched. And, again, crisp, flowing rhymes that engage the reader. A delightful poem, also uplifting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2018 11:21:00 PM You are catching up on all my poems and here I am just now getting online. I have been on the phone all day with daugh, sister, and friends. When it rains....thank you! : )

Charlie Smith Date: 8/23/2018 3:58:00 PM You really do love angels, well done Connie, congratulations... Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/23/2018 4:49:00 PM Thank you Charlie. Whenever I ask for help they respond. ; )

Lyric Man Date: 8/20/2018 6:54:00 PM Connie, your poem is as beautiful as an Angel Rose and a well deserved winner in the recent contest! Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2018 7:32:00 PM Thank you much Dave. I adore angels and the help they freely give me. : )

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/18/2018 7:16:00 PM No greater love then benign love that comes from above, Well written and heart felt dear poetess. Thanks for sharing. Have a great evening Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2018 2:14:00 PM Thank you very much for your lovely comment Pixie. It is much appreciated! : ) xxoo

Jack Horne Date: 8/18/2018 10:20:00 AM love this, Connie - beautiful writing, as ever - & what a lovely flower Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2018 2:15:00 PM I agree Jack. I have that rose, tho I got the photo from the internet. Thank you! : )

Susan Gentry Date: 8/18/2018 4:34:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2018 7:27:00 PM soupmail. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2018 7:25:00 PM Oh finally I am seeing this one. Sorry I have been too busy . I did not even notice I had not read your angel poem yet, let alone congratulate you. THat was a well deserved win, Connie. Login to Reply

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 8/17/2018 3:28:00 PM Congrats for your win, Connie - also for being named on the Top Contest Poets list for the past 6 months. I too am a great believer in angels - bob Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/17/2018 12:42:00 PM The photo of this rose is almost as breathtaking as your poetic tribute to it, Connie. Congratulations on your win! There is a gemstone called "angelite" that is similar in color to this rose. Thank you for our conversation. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jerry T Curtis Date: 8/17/2018 8:33:00 AM I heard " A picture is worth a thousand words" But I say "A poem is worth a thousand pictures" ---at least yours are. Well done Connie God Bless Login to Reply

Pashang Salehi Date: 8/17/2018 3:25:00 AM Beautifully done ... deservedly so... Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 8/17/2018 2:04:00 AM How lovely, Connie, much enjoyed. Congrats! Viv x Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/17/2018 1:57:00 AM Congratulations, Connie on your win. Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 8/16/2018 4:17:00 PM A lovely flowing poem Connie, congrats :) Login to Reply

Francesca Pappadogiannis Date: 8/16/2018 1:11:00 PM Congrats my friend. A truly poetic and lovely piece of poetry. I loved the simile with the lavender rose especially. It has always been a colour that's stood out as a higher essence to me. :) Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/16/2018 12:13:00 PM Beautiful poem! CONGRATS, Connie! Janice Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 8/16/2018 12:05:00 PM Congratulations Connie, your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Angels" contest. Very well done my friend, it was a hard contest to judge, Emile. Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/16/2018 12:47:00 PM Thank you very much Emile. You certainly must have struggled over judging this contest. You had so many wonderful entries. I am delighted to have made it onto your short winner's list! Thank you my friend. : )

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/16/2018 7:12:00 AM Reads like a prayer ..comforting ...divine...well done Connie. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/16/2018 5:42:00 AM Hi Connie, you touch the soul with this truly wonderful write. What grace and peace your words bring as they sing so gently into the heart. The angels touch you every day. They lift your heart so you can write your excellent words that we all read. I love the content of this exceptional piece. This angelic gem goes into my faves. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/15/2018 7:53:00 PM I am a big angel believer, and so this poem calls to all the parts of my heart that are in touch with my own angels. So nicely built, and pure, Connie. Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 8/15/2018 7:36:00 PM Just sweet as can be...A lovely write...All the best Connie Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 8/15/2018 7:19:00 PM Their love stretches far beyond eternity...and they have touched your heart as they have mine...an Angelic entry my dear Connie...a Fav from me and the Angels...Love & the Angels light...^WW^ Login to Reply Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/16/2018 12:35:00 AM Thank you so much WW, especially for the fave. It means a lot to me when someone faves one of my poems. I have angels in every room. : )

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