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Angel In the Valley

An Angel in the valley I once met At the base of the Falls where I did set Over the rocks the water poured Accenting each one's shape and form Her soft voice blending with the waters flow Played a song in my ears not heard before Our conversation short but sweet While sunlight shimmered upon the leaves The cool spray of the water The warmth of her eyes Melted together like earth and sky As we parted ways I knew I'd been blessed By this angel in the valley that I had met At the base of the Falls where I did set

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/30/2017 7:57:00 AM

This is very nice. Such a peaceful poem Edward. Well done :)

Edward Mccall
Date: 3/30/2017 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Heidi I'm glad you like it.

Chris Green

Date: 3/30/2017 6:24:00 AM

Beautifully crafted Edward. is was a feel good poem that takes the reader directly to that place where you met this angel. Nicely done.

Edward Mccall
Date: 3/30/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Chris for your kind words I'm glad you like it. The valley I wrote about is a real place and the poem itself is about a brief encounter with a woman I met there.