Angel Eyes

Sticthchwort,speedwell,celandine
Sprinkled in the dew
Jostle in the rain,with feverfew-
Cowslips ,delicate as lace
Evidence God's grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 2:12 AM
A sweet piece, with neat alliteration and sumptuous imagery... well done Brian! Best wishes, Keith
Moreno Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:41 PM
Lovely Tanka with great alliteration...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Great piece..I'm going to have to look up some of these plants..I love "jostle in the rain"..my kind of poem.. Bg
Gass Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:20 AM
This is so beautiful, Brian. Lovely images in this sweet flowing poem and the title is lovely as well! Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 9:44 AM
A lovely image painted with your creative words, Brian!
Richards Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 8:04 AM
Loved the title as well as the poem! Cowslips, so delicate....how enchanting!:) love this! ~Carrie
Sheart Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Hi Brian Beautiful images. Love the 3rd one! Great ending too. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia Oh, thanks for your most welcome comments on my latest lyric. Very much apprciated as always.
Townsend Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 6:06 AM
This is a lovely write flowing right off the page. It reminds me of the warmth of Spring. They are predicting around ten inches of snow where I live between tonight and tomorrow, so I appreciate the warmth. Great imagery. Smiles from Lolita
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 5:27 AM
wonderful ability to let our minds wander nature, nice, Brian! Jim
Winter Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Ah yes, such beauty last line must be true! Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 4:39 AM
I love the last two lines to this write Brian...lace and God's grace..sometimes a reminder is very good. Thanks for the well thoughout write.
Rhinem Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 1:28 AM
Good Morning Brian! I sincerely hope that you are doing well this morning my far away freind!? I love the title of this write very much! But even more so I love your faith~along with the brilliance of your talented and amazing words sometimes! You are a bright light from a distant land~wherein much of my anchestry today dwells! Can you not tell by my name? This is a very excellent write-filled with the brighest Light!:) My love to you and your loves always, John!:)
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