Angel 2

during talking to this young lady 
i looked on her quiet fondly as a friend
still stunned when she kissed me
i stepped back with shock
yet looking at her in a softened heart
i felt for her looking into her eyes i said
stop sweetheart as i looked at her 
inside i was crying 
so long since i heard them words 
i love you
putting both hands on her face
saying looking into her eyes 
you are so very sweet
she never saw inside what them words meant
i saw in her eyes hurt 
feeling so ashamed 
i hugged her saying
never give your feelings away
so easily to a man you barely know
you began pleading 
saying you knew me for ages
it was only in the space of shopping
i felt ever so bad 
wishing the ground to swallow me
so much going on in one's head 
finding it hard to cope
then you began telling me 
that for months you had been watching me
as we spoke once a week on the rare occasion twice
always smiling sometimes 
coming up behind me 
playfully giving me a fright then laughing
all this time i saw you as a friend
during the conversation
she began telling me
each time i entered the shop
she got butterflies
i felt so sad heart touched
honestly did not know what to say
beyond flattered
at that moment i felt broken hearted
i did not want to hurt her
she began saying you are always so nice 
i love speaking to you 
waiting and hoping to see you each we
smiling lost for words
each time after shopping
always headed to her till
she always smiled beautiful
each time she saw me even 
among'st a crowd 
her look would single me out 
at the time one never noticed
to wrapped up in everything else in my life
there was no room within 
my heart that time
to let you in
in fact i love the company
inside emotion 
i shut completely down
flattered she kissed me again
honestly it tasted beautiful
i stopped her
deep within the mind one was hurting
with shattered love deep inside
please darling i said
i do not want to hurt you
try to understand my is not right
never mentioning hospitals
making one feel heartless
you began promising me
the very world you live in
inside i could feel a crying emotion
my mind in bits and pieces
barely living walking around 
blind to everyone in my own hurt
the scars were still attached to feelings
of emotion that was not dealt with yet
i was a million miles away in a different space 
now i see a lot clearer this is on story i will write


continued  angel 3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/18/2013 3:04:00 PM
Its sad when emotions can t be reciprocated..Friendships are always beautiful even if they don t lead to relationships. ..Having someone to care for and being cared of will heal the pain.I thought your x was ill not you.Must have misunderstood in previous weeks.Hope you re feeling better.You are strong and will be fine.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/18/2013 7:03:00 PM
MY PRAYERS ARE ALWAYS TO PROTECT ANGELS LIKE YOU I AM OF VERY STRONG CHARACTER I ALREADY SEEN MY BODY OUTSIDE WITH MY SOUL I AS ONE TIME I WAS NEAR DEAD I WROTE A BOOK ON IT I PLEADED WITH GOD TO HELP ME TWICE HE STEPPED IN I WRITE FROM THE FOUNTAIN OF LIFE AND THE BUTTERFLY IN ITS WIGS FLUTTERING KISSES GOODNIGHT THANK YOU IN THE DEEPEST APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/18/2013 3:06:00 PM
I ll pray for you before i sleep..A lady butterfly's word : : )
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