Andy Got No Candy

Andy dressed up in a costume
to do tricks for his treats.
He stept outside and tripped,
on the tail of his monkey suit.
The kids laughed and pointed.
Poor Andy ran away ,
no candy in hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 7:05 AM
A well deserved featured poem you have here Mercedes. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations Mercedes on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Many congrats on your win in the contest Mercede's, nice one >> James
Roberts Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 12:00 PM
congratulations on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest.Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Mercedes....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Congrats Mercedes on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy a big win tonight with luv and a H.T. Day to u..
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, mercedes
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Hey, that's no fair!! I'm an Andie and I love CANDY. congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations Mercedes, on your worthy poem's place in the winner's circle. Happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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November 23, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Poor , Andy,, i feel bad for the kid,, and shame on the ones who laughed,..p.d.
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