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I used to teach A for Andromeda, a play As back as in late sixties. I desire to buy the star Andromeda Of the Andromeda galaxy From the cosmologist Fred Hoyle. Let she be my ruling star For my sweetie Charmer Iris. Oh fair biological built Andromeda Of short childhood and immortal youth Quite Ignorant of all feelings To teach you love they touched you softly To teach you pain they pinched you. My heavenly passions have flown Yours is the blushing hours I invoke you to rise early And delay your departure. Shine where my charmer Iris breathe Shine on her flowers-scented path Where gentle air winnows Her silken tresses darkly flow. And fall upon her brow so fair Shine on Iris when she is here And guide this pilgrim to her. ============================ Sixth Placement Contest: Shining Star ============================= I taught A for Andromeda, a one-act play in late sixties.I have imagined Andromeda a star in the galaxy of the same name for my Charmer Iris. I am inspired right by the title Shining star. The Milky Way's nearest neighbor in space is the spiral galaxy, Andromeda. It was first seen by the naked eye in 964 by a Persian astronomer, Abd Al-Rahman Al Sufi, who believed it to be a small cloud. It was first seen by a telescope in 1612 by Simon Marius.

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Date: 5/14/2010 3:50:00 AM
I too was fascinated by Andromeda as a young man. As is our own galaxy. They are engaged and will be wed long after the human race has destroyed itself. Hopefully it will be a successful union and the two black holes (The hearts of the galaxies) will join without destroying one another. Of course by that time I hope to be wearing my wings by then.
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Date: 4/20/2010 9:31:00 PM
Great job with this informative poem! Congratulations. Andrea
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:33:00 AM
Pretty cool Congrats Dr Ramm
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest DR. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/17/2010 8:00:00 PM
Thanks Linda Marie for the compliments
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:31:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. excellent write and thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:25:00 AM
No humor in the verse Oh Dear What can the Matter be? only a man would think it's funny and it's sad to me kind sir you did........India is notorious for the mistreatment of girl children. Perhaps write us of that from a women's point of view for the contest. Loved the above verse you wrote as always intellegent and thought provoking. Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:12:00 AM
very nice write and thank you for all of your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:47:00 AM
What a thing to learn, I am always good on the stars. I just learned something right now. I have read of Simon M. Just not the year. I have never heard of the play. This has been a pleasure to read. Thank you also for the comment. P.D.
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:43:00 AM
Great educational write as well as a romantic piece...Keep the creative pen flowing...Good luck in the contest..Sara
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