And When the Thing Comes Down

The smell of beer glides across the room,
The darkness, sweet and deep
With smoke stacked like lumber,
Covering the cracks.
The roaches take shield.

Stiff lipped cockroaches that bite,
Their flaky smell covered by the beer,
But in dim silences their sound splits
The caverns of the empty cabinets, drawers and shelves.

Bare room except for bed and red
Light, radio and poster of Malcolm.
One poster of one man who lived 
And died, what more is there?

When in white heat discussions, gray women ask-
But won't your own people be killed? eyes concerned.
Bearded men answer in their minds.
The things people die of,
Are killed for.

Past the bed, one kitchen filled with
Dark men drinking.
Some with thirsts from dry cracked lips
Parched by strange suns.

Heat waves running through that blood
Like clapping thunder in a storm.

We have hurricanes down home
That turn men 'round.
And it rounds minds like twisters
This thing I speak of.

And when the thing comes down...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 12/7/2008 12:59:00 PM
Very powerful, and well deserved to be honored this week. Great job, Rhea! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2008 6:32:00 PM
Dear Rhea - I always love reading your poetry. Beautiful in it's simplicity. Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 12/5/2008 5:52:00 PM
Vivid images , so haunting and real. Very powerful writing her dear Rhea.
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Date: 12/2/2008 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2008 1:34:00 PM
This is a good strong style, Rhea, a strong utterance. You definitely have something to say. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:55:00 PM
The vivid imagery forwards your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Interesting way to close this piece. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:09:00 PM
Rhea, first of all and most importantly, miss you here and hope you are doing well. Congratulations on an amazing write being featured this week. Hope you are back soon posting your awesome poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/1/2008 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations Rhea on your narrative "And When The Thing Comes Down" being featrured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 11/30/2008 9:19:00 PM
Rhea - Wow that was a great tale so well said - Congratulations on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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