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And We Both Were Dead

In the mist of October, brown leaves fall. Some trees were dead, And the rest is blooming, Ending yet, the beginning. Most mysterious thing, Brown leaves haunt, but indeed they fall; Start of a poem, chilly wind whispers, Brown leaves fall, The new Golden-one, appears. Story of Autumn yet to be told.

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Date: 10/22/2023 5:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on Autumn through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Nafees Reza
Date: 10/22/2023 11:42:00 AM
Ahh, thanks a lot, little rock star, i really appreciate it, really love that iam really happy that you welcomed me :)

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