And There Was Light-

“And there was light… “

Golden radiance 
Treetop waves glow pure brightness.
Warming all that lives.

© Dane Smith-Johnsen
April 9, 2010

sciencehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2010 1:34:00 PM

A very sweet one, Dane Ann. Congratulations!! Luv, andrea

Date: 4/16/2010 1:13:00 PM

What an uplifting view. You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Way to go! Keep up the good writing. Enjoy your success. Karen

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/16/2010 8:30:00 AM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 5:15:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a perfect visual in words of the photo.. enjoy your special win ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2010 3:22:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Congrats Dane Ann- Gives off a warm feeling

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2010 1:43:00 AM

DASJ, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2010 5:18:00 AM

Great write in this one..should be in the winner's circle...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/11/2010 3:27:00 AM

you warm our hearts dear friend in such a special way,lovely poem-Charma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2010 8:42:00 PM

Dane Ann, this is really beautiful and captures the photo perfectly. Best of luck in the contest, though I doubt you will need it with this special haiku. Blessings, Connie

Mitch White

Date: 4/10/2010 2:43:00 PM

Beautiful glowing Haiku Dane Ann

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2010 9:18:00 AM

Hi Dane Ann :) the imagery that this haiku has is really beautiful, wish you the best in the contest! I'm also curious about your contest---hmm so you can't see the entries? Poetry Soup seems to have a major glitch since I don't think anybody can view the blogs, hope this gets fixed soon! happy weekend!

Constance La France

Date: 4/10/2010 6:32:00 AM

This is so pretty and enchanting... and by the way, I cannot see the blogs either, but I was wondering, what did you mean by contest entries vanished????.. the entries for my contest are okay... love Constance