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And then it happened, You walked right through my door, You looked deep into my dark blue eyes, And said you wanted more, More of the life I was happy to give, More of the “me” inside you, You wanted you and me to be more an “us”, To be one made out of two, You told me you loved me, And I nailed each word to my gate, Inside my heart, inside my love, I nailed your words, your smell, your taste, And now, each day, when I walk through the gate, I walk through with love in my soul, Love of what we are together, Through your words, like a rose in a garden, I stroll.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/1/2018 6:56:00 AM
Stroll on...this was beautiful; a fabulous painting, as well.
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Date: 9/7/2018 12:28:00 PM
Romantically sweet! Nice piece this is..
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:34:00 AM
Wow and Wow. The poem a fave, that painting, Lewis, is amazing. Damn you're good ;) xomo! Hope you're well.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 9/6/2018 7:07:00 PM
Than you Maureen, I enjoy painting kisses.

Book: Shattered Sighs