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And Then I Kissed Him - Collaboration With Tim Smith

Hot date
Can’t wait

We're at
My flat

Cute eyes
Nice thighs

Admit
She’s fit

So sweet
Must eat

We dine
Sublime

First Kiss
Sheer bliss

Soft peck
On neck

Tongue's twirl
Toes curl

First base
Hearts race

Undressed
Bare breast

Blimey
She’s ‘HE’

No joy
Ladyboy

Fussy
Pussy

Night ends
As friends

Written by Jan Allison & Tim Smith
28th August 2014

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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March 4, 2018 at 12:47 PM

Hello Jan, I just found this one when I looked up top examples of Footle poems. You and Tim did a marvelous job with this one, especially with the "Blimey/She's 'HE'!! It took me a while to find it, but I'm really glad I read this footle. Very Funny!! Best Always, Gary

March 4, 2018 at 1:06 PM

We had such fun writing these footles Gary, thanks for dropping by: an older poem on my page-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

October 29, 2017 at 2:55 PM

Very, very clever!

October 29, 2017 at 5:12 PM

I ADORE the footle form and have written many poems using the clever form and had great fun collaborating with Tim ... it was difficult to write just one for Judy today:-) hugs jan xx

April 24, 2017 at 2:41 PM

That was fun. I don't know how I missed this one. Very cool and funny both of you.

April 26, 2017 at 3:24 PM

Gosh Chris this was written a few months after i joined ... we used to have SUCH fun i wish it would come back to the site:-( hugs Jan xx

March 20, 2017 at 8:03 PM

Wow! I love it! Fun, funny and clever.

March 26, 2017 at 5:27 PM

Thanks Carole I had great fun writing footles with Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Benjamin Wormwood

November 13, 2016 at 3:09 PM

This is hilarious, I love it!!

November 13, 2016 at 3:12 PM

I love the footle form Benjamin and I love the twist at the end of this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

October 5, 2016 at 3:05 AM

Ooohhh, this is SWEET :D Love it!!

October 5, 2016 at 3:14 AM

We had SUCH fun writing this form I have written quite a few and also done several collaborations in the past - footles are so easy to write I love the simple rhyming form:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Martins

October 1, 2016 at 7:31 AM

Just came across this and I have been in stitches =)=)... A footle favourite for this PS newbie... Great job guys

October 1, 2016 at 7:27 PM

Oh Richard thanks for reading this poem - Tim and I had such fun with this particular poem the ending really makes me LOL:-) hugs jan xx

September 5, 2014 at 12:53 PM

I had forgotten to add this to my favs so I came in to do just that.

September 5, 2014 at 12:55 PM

Aww thank you so much Maurice it was so much fun writing with Tim and getting him to reveal more of his naughty side LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

August 29, 2014 at 4:06 PM

Full of fuel to eventual fool, in the end, we're friends. Yep, U2 have a fine knack of writing these foible Footle's - James :) :)

August 29, 2014 at 4:10 PM

;-) my pleasure :)

August 29, 2014 at 4:07 PM

I thought you would appreciate it James thanks for dropping by:-) hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2014 at 1:36 AM

hahaha, fussy pussy?? What the ??? These were really awesome, Jan. some of your best of both you guys right here!!

August 29, 2014 at 4:17 AM

I think this is my favourite set of footles Andrea - I am admitting to nothing of course I wouldn't kiss and tell as to who wrote what and Tim is lovely to work with:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 5:49 PM

Haha love this. Glad they stayed friends. Thank you for your comment. I'm sure your son will have a great time at uni

August 28, 2014 at 6:04 PM

I went to a place called Ravensbourne which used to be in Chislehurst, now in Greenwich. The halls I went to has now been knocked down... Sad times :)

August 28, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem i really enjoyed your write:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 4:19 PM

hahaha great! Oh my toes were ready to curl! lol good ones :)

August 28, 2014 at 5:51 PM

He loves to show off his pink nail varnish Casarah:-) Hugs Jan xx

August 28, 2014 at 4:28 PM

I never told you that about me...lol

August 28, 2014 at 4:22 PM

Thank you for letting me borrow Tim Casarah - I return him back to you in almost perfect condition - we had great fun with this poem:-) hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 3:59 PM

well that's a laugh out loud.....LOL

August 28, 2014 at 4:14 PM

Judy if it wasn't for your contest we wouldn't all be having such fun with this form:-) Thank you thank you thank you:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 3:07 PM

Got a chuckle..That would be disarming..Enjoyed reading the collaboration..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

August 28, 2014 at 3:10 PM

Glad it made you giggle Sara we had fun writing it together:-) hugs Jan xx

August 28, 2014 at 1:54 PM

Haha Omg This makes me laugh really hard cause I was reading it seriously and when I reach the later part give me such surprise ^__________^

August 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM

I am glad it made you laugh Doris we had such fun writing it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

August 28, 2014 at 11:04 AM

Dear Jan and Tim, Your witty footles evoked images of the "Crying Game" for me. How well you describe the building of emotions and passion, only for the man to find she is a "HE." Awesome! You two co-write so well together. It would be nice to see you do a co-write for Whispers. Also, I'm collecting footles on football for publication on Whispers. Both of you could send one or two to me and they'll be published as a special feature in September. Excellent write! Love, Carolyn

August 28, 2014 at 12:32 PM

Thanks Carolyn....That would be fun...I will work on some when I get home....feel free to use these as well.....hugs Tim

August 28, 2014 at 11:12 AM

If Tim would agree you could always use this one for Whispers it is witty without being too rude - it would be an honour to get published elsewhere:-) Thanks for the lovely comment Carolyn You have made my day:-) Hugs Janxxx

Christine Costello

August 28, 2014 at 10:52 AM

This was great-still chuckling. I just love your footles. :-) Christine

August 28, 2014 at 11:09 AM

Thanks Christine we had great fun with this one - Tim is a delight to work with:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM

Great humour lovely Jan ! U really hv gone crazy did footles! Keep up the spirit both of u!

August 28, 2014 at 10:33 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma we both lost our muses yesterday so I suggested we come up with a fun write and this is the result:-) It is lovely to see Tim's naughty side emerging! Hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 10:23 AM

i'm just guessing but i bet bare breast was Tim's idea. this is definitely one of my favorite footles yet. i love it. two talented writers being able to write as one. what a beautiful relationship. God Bless both your wonderful hearts.

August 28, 2014 at 10:39 AM

Phew my reputation remains in tact LOL :_) XXX

August 28, 2014 at 10:37 AM

We will never tell *wink*...lol

August 28, 2014 at 10:32 AM

When you collaborate you never admit which lines either person wrote so .. I will leave you guessing :-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

August 28, 2014 at 9:38 AM

Love it! I had a good laugh.

August 28, 2014 at 9:40 AM

Tim is a joy to work with and a lovely friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

August 28, 2014 at 9:36 AM

Thanks for being a great sport Tim - thoroughly enjoyed this collaboration:-) Hugs Jan xxx

August 28, 2014 at 9:52 AM

Haha....turned out nice....hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian

August 28, 2014 at 9:35 AM

;) Hmmmmmmmm......good one, though I was hoping for some hot stuff to come! Seeing it is what it is...am glad it ended when it did.

August 28, 2014 at 9:36 AM

LOL Eileen we had fun writing it together and i adore the twist at the end:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

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