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And Then He Cried

His love was ever present but quiet…still in it they found relief…so it only stands to reason he’d be quiet in his grief.

There are no rules for dealing with death…which is why, after his wife died,…despite his heart being broken…despite his sorrow…despite all this…he never cried.

His children and friends would visit…wanting to help…and in so many ways they tried…but in spite of their friendship and love…in spite of the sorrow hiding in his heart…in spite of all this…he never cried.

In his mind it was quite simple…there was one hope he kept leaning on…for in spite of what he knew to be true…he could’t accept that she was gone.

After 40 years together he kept hoping…dreaming she would walk through their front door…and greet him with a smile as she’d done a million times before.

Hoping what had happened couldn’t possibly be true…that it must be a mistake…a big misunderstanding…a dream from which he will awake.

In his own time he did come to realize his life would never return to the same track…that his wife is gone forever…that she’ll never be coming back.

On that day…
the day he understood she would no longer be there to hold his hand…
to whisper in his ear…
to look at him wide-eyed…
that is the day he grabbed his heart…
fell to his knees…
that is the day…
he cried.
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Doll Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Jim, Congratulations on POTD. Wonderful write. Have a great Tuesday~ Warren
Awtry Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Thank you for sharing with us. It is beautiful. Congratulations for your well deserved honor of Poem of the Day.
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved Potd with this heart touching write. Enjoy the honour and day
Nicole Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Dealing with death is difficult for some. Your thoughts remind me of a movie I recently watched, which is based on true story. "Tuesdays with Morrie" A few quotes from that movie are: "Death ends a life, not a relationship".... "I give myself a good cry if I need it, but then I concentrate on all good things still in my life" This movie touched my heart so deeply. It is okay to cry. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations on having this wonderfully moving poem honored with POTD Jim. I could identify so closely with your poem as my husband of forty years has been gone a year. Carrying on alone is one of the most difficult things in life. Blessings, Connie
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Death is overwhelming to a spirit and you wait everyday for them to come through that door again, but it never happens. Finally after a few years you finally except .. Congratulations on POTD.
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Hi..this is so touching. All POTDs are a blessing. It is we, who turn up our arrogant noses at some, Enjoy your honor today to the max! Panagiota
Kauffman Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Jim. Wonderfully penned.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 10:12 AM
A gorgeous poem - it deserved POTD.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Such an emotional write. Hearty congrats on your POTD. God bless ~ Ani
Peck Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Oh, how sad and beautiful. Congratulations on POTD!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "AND THEN HE CRIED" is a wonderful yet sad story/write. So sorry for your loss. Have a blessed autumn day with your win...............
May Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 7:54 AM
A grief as deep as his love, all that was left was for tears to flow, Well written, Congrats on POTD
Mcgee Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Heartfelt emotions streaming from your pen. Congrats on your POTD.
Hankins Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations, Jim, that your outstanding poem has been well-received and appreciated with a P.O.T.D.
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 6:54 AM
BIG congrats on poem of the day, Jim. This is awesome--emotive, heartfelt...
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 6:37 AM
So heart wrenching. So sorry for your loss. Congratulations for potd.
La France Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Jim, oh my gosh, I cried! What a fantastic emotional and beautifully sad poem and congratulations on receiving the deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor (is the he you?) ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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November 1, 2021 at 5:57 AM
So sad though beautifully written Jim. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Mcintosh Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Beautifully done. Amazing writing. You always inspire and enlighten with your words. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 5:05 AM
such a heart wrenching piece Jim, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Reply
Lawless Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Nicely written Jim. In our own way I believe we all cry after failing "to be strong" for everyone else.
Gilmour Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 3:41 AM
Such an emotional poem and by the end my tears were flowing... many congratulations Jim for this beautifully written POTD. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 12:43 AM
We all try and put on a brave face Jim but in the end we have to come to terms with our loss and release our emotions. Congrats on your POTD. Tom
Sands Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Excellent poem! Yes, heart wrenching , but true! When I suddenly lost someone important years ago, I did cry at first, but I do remember moving forward through the motion as if it was not real. You have written this so well. Blessings to you. A Fave for me :)
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