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And Still the Troops Are Marching

...inspired by 'Dry Loaf' by Wallace Stevens

 

The loaf is stretched, a wretched game,
need is the arbiter of taste
as pride takes on another meaning,
duty is the call that summons,
love and hunger mean the same.

Hope directed to the cause,
troops in uniform are marching,
those left behind forever searching
for reports of dead and wounded,
bitter tears or strained applause.

Hunger troubles starving children,
and the hearts of those who've worried,
servicemen and sweethearts, wives
and mothers with their feelings buried,
lives on hold, a crushing burden.

Spring appears and goes unnoticed,
the crocus unappreciated,
flocks of starlings block the sun,
black as the barrel of a gun,
and still the troops are marching, marching.

The sea is grey with gulls and smoke,
waves broken like the battered land,
sounds of conflict rise unceasing,
troops advancing and retreating,
marching, marching, 'til the bitter end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chircop Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Indeed a bitter end to war,its always a bitter end.Your descriptions make me capture the moment and the sadness surrounding it. Excellent post dear friend.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 12:54 AM
Thanks Charmaine! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Promise Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:27 PM
The dedication of a soldier, marching marching! War is devastating: cries, children, hunger, the wounded...well penned.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thanks so much! greatly appreciated. Keith
Guzzi Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Johnny I Hardley Knew Ya-youtube.com/watch?v=wFUTHcjiZGo 200 years old! sigh
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Thank Debbie! Much appreciated. Keith
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