And So You'Re Gone

AND SO YOU’RE GONE

And so you’re gone…
now what should I do? 
My love…

Should I keep on believing, 
you’ll come back to me?
I might go insane, 
as I sit here waiting

What about the memories, 
etched deep in my brain?

I can hope…
cause there’s always hope…
My love…

That you’ll understand your feelings, 
and come home to me!
I might go insane, 
as I’m contemplating

What about the memories, 
etched deep in my brain?

Bridge
I don’t know…the best way to go
Start again…and live without you
Hope to find another friend…or
I could sit here and keep waiting
Ooohhh!!

And so you’re gone…
now what should I do? 
My love…

Should I keep on believing, 
you’ll come back to me?
I might go insane, 
as I sit here waiting

What about the memories, 
etched deep in my brain?

I can hope…
cause there’s always hope…
My love…

That you’ll understand your feelings, 
and come home to me!
I might go insane, 
as I’m contemplating

What about the memories, 
etched deep in my brain?

Bridge repeat and fade

Copyright 
John Derek Hamilton 
July06,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Schiavina Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Beautiful well written poem. The feelings are so clearly expressed. Thank you for sharing.
Hamilton Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Thanks Frances!
Gentry Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on POTD, a little late. A sad, write, raw. Well done.
Hamilton Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Thanks Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 3:32 PM
A wonderful poignant peace John! Congratulations on having this fine poem honored with POTD! : )
Hamilton Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Thanks Connie was a pleasant surprise.
Ashley Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:53 PM
John, such sad waves of painful emotions wash over me as I read your heartbreaking lyrics John. It's so hard to come to grips with life when you're in love's limbo, caught between reluctantly moving forward or desperately waiting in hope. Your yearning for the desired outcome is expressed with poignant beauty. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors with your deeply moving song. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your kind words and visit!
Lane Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 7:41 AM
These are very wistful lyrics, John. I hope they're not based on a recurrence of a health issue in your family.
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Lin, unfortunately they are.
Pett Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Arturo with your romantic and beautifully written verse. :))
Pett Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 4:10 AM
Sorry John jumped on to your page when commenting on Arturo’s poem ???
Waters Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 9:05 PM
enjoyed your sad song-love always -V
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Virginia
Pett Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD John, great Lyric. :))
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Thanks Roy
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:23 PM
The scenes you have painted in this lovely Nipponnet extol the loveliness of nature Lin. Congratulations on having this poem honored for POTD! Insipid....really, what an insult to call anyone's poetic endeavors insipid. They should not be allowed to judge. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Think your comment to Lin jumped to my page somehow Connie!
May Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Sometimes hope is all we have..Congrats on POTD John
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thanks Joseph
Warrior Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Congrats!!! my lyrical friend on your POTD!...A song to remember...love & light...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thanks WW was a nice surprise, never thought I'd get another one!
Turner Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations John on POTD. Time to move on. Once you lose love, it's never the same when you find it. Nice lyrics John. Everybody loves a sad song.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:52 PM
So true, thanks Danny!
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 11:15 AM
- Glad to see this again ... congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thanks again Anne-Lise
Wanter Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Will someone write a melody for this - it would hit platinum. Congratulations!
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Working on the melodies, finally found some singers, producers to work with me, hope you're right! Thanks SW!
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:15 AM
I hope you never stop the lyrics my friend, I always enjoy them so...
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Charlie, I've finally found some musicians/producers willing to work with my lyrics so hopefully...
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Lovely lyric John but with a sad story. Congratulations on POTD. Tom.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Tom, nice of you to pass by!
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Great lyrics, John, congrats on POTD.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thanks John!
Doll Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 7:43 AM
John, such an anthem to hope in a very difficult time. Well done. Congratulations on POTD.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks WD, much appreciated!
Capitano Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 7:14 AM
A sad refrain of loss that most can relate to; congrats on POTD.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thanks Phil, nice to see you back!
Pandit Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Congrats John, on poem of the day.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thanks Vijay!
Williams Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful lyrics John, heartfelt, full of emotion and hope. One must always hope. A great choice for POTD, congratulations....Maria hugs
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks Maria, you are very kind!
One Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Deep lyrics John.. hope you are well..
Hamilton Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:55 PM
Thanks SO doing ok, some days worse than others.
Thomas Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Definitely a place no one wants to be. You've spoken the heart of many here John.
Hamilton Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thanks F.J, it is a difficult place to be in!
Man Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:53 PM
John.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
Hamilton Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Very poetic comment LM, thanks for passing by my way!
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 5:22 PM
I enjoyed your newest song lyrics, John. It would be all that a person could do to keep from going crazy in a situation like this! (thanks for your sonnet contest. It was fun to contemplate my best sonnet, though probably there was another one maybe better!)
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Thanks Andrea, the contest was very tough to judge as you can see.
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