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And Just Like That- TRI

Through the park I walked, alone As the moon reflected off the lake I made a wish and tossed a stone A sleeping owl, I did awake As the moon reflected off the lake Echoes chimed from the owl's hoots Distant sounds- train's whistle toots I made a wish and tossed a stone Perhaps beneath the stars so bright I just might find my love tonight A sleeping owl, I did awake He hooted a symphony that rose above And just like that, there was my love

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Date: 8/24/2024 5:16:00 AM
Who says I'm a romantic? Your poem really touched my heart with its implications.
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Date: 8/16/2024 6:04:00 PM
An owl's symphony, how lovely. My favorite lines are your last four. Nature and love together make a wonderful pair. I'm happy you found yours.
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Date: 8/13/2024 12:19:00 PM
Quite an eerie scene you paint with your words Charlie, at least she turned up. Tom
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Date: 8/13/2024 10:19:00 AM
Very romantic, Charlie, with vivid images that take me into your pensive walk in the park! The last line is so uplifting. Hope all is well. Blessings, my friend!
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