And I Could Not Look Away

and I could not look away

I stared into the shadows 
of a lover’s distant past
Heard whispers in the darkness 
of the spell her heart did cast

As it raked across my feelings 
and I cried out in the night
When this smile I was wearing 
fit a little bit too tight

With her painted nails of crimson 
like the color of my blood
She clawed at my emotions 
as the silhouettes did flood

This morning found believing 
that our time is filled with fate
Where I find my voice is screaming, 
please don’t tell me it’s too late

She collected every promise 
on the worries I did call
For she wanted me to know that 
I could never have it all

Still I crawled into the silence 
with my eyes so open wide
And together we were drowning 
in the motion of the tide

In her arms now spun the seconds 
of the minutes I could spare
Like a clock that’s steady ticking 
darkened rhythms sent to share

Drinking thirsty from the fountain 
as her finger it did press
On the chrome implanted wishes 
of an early moon confess

For her smile was infectious
as it hid her dirty deeds
When I fell intoxicated
still to stagger in these needs

Tried to gaze off in the distance 
but my vision would not stay
I was trapped in her seduction... 

and I could not look away



Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/29/2018 5:58:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. What beautiful poetry. Always are you consistent in your compositions and executions. The reader knows he is reading and soaking up poetic thoughts and words. This entry is evident of that. May this day find you well. Always is it an honor turning to your page.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/29/2018 9:40:00 AM
Hey there my long lost friend. Thank you very much. It is so nice to see you again. I hope your day is as beautiful as this comment you have left for me.
Date: 8/24/2018 11:57:00 AM
Being lost in seduction, causes the heart- as well as the entire being to helplessly fall. Your thoughts leave me wanting more. Not wishing to look away. Truly breathtaking indeed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/27/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Brandy. This one was fun to write. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/23/2018 5:28:00 PM
Your poem had me spellbound. So sorry to hear ab out the loss of your dear mom. It takes a while to sift through the memories, we just buried her yesterday, Yours words tome were a great comfort. Thank you for your caring ways.
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Date: 8/24/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness.
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