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And Heaven Weeps

In the dance of life the river cries its soul, From the teardrops collecting in mountainous ravines, To the icy floes which melt on sunless days, What falls from heaven in folded sheets of misting rain, Wrests from the river its bitter pain. The seasons pass as the aged bark of a deadening tree, With the memories of a lonely stalk against the grain, The heart of the river begins to flow and echoes down below, Every droplet weary of the long winding pathway, And in heaven the clouds gather to bring a refreshing rain. At the bank of the river flow its hopes and dreams, Of what could have been, Of what will be, Every travesty cast upon the waters, And the rainfall sent by heaven fills the river anew. Through every storm and every passing season, Comes a swelling of memories which rise to the surface, But the heart of the river must remain pure, For every turbulent mile of its distance was known, And heaven weeps for its mightiest rivers.

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Date: 9/11/2017 2:45:00 AM
Love the ride as Heaven weeps!
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 9/11/2017 5:15:00 AM
Again, thank you very much James for reading my poems. I'll return the favor as you are a prolific writer.
Date: 7/30/2017 4:50:00 PM
Real blessed write Thomas, you travel many poetic miles with this superb piece of work taking us across many valleys and mountains. I see you're new on PS, hope you're enjoying your time here and keep spilling the ink. Blessings Gordon
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/30/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and generous comment. I shall look forward to reading your inspirational poetry.
Date: 7/28/2017 11:25:00 AM
- You describe this wonderful, a talented poem that I really enjoy Thomas :) - Welcome to the "soup" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/28/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your kind comment. I shall enjoy reading your work.
Date: 7/28/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thomas I really enjoyed this profound poem of yours. You are an incredible poet A lot more people should be reading your brilliant work. PS A little tip, when I first joined Poetry soup, i made as many comments on poets that I liked. That way you can fill a good support base...Maria
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/28/2017 7:30:00 PM
I feel a little embarrassed because I don't think my poetry is that good. I enjoy reading your work, and I often marvel at how you conceptualize beautiful imagery and pen the most appropriate wording. Thank you for your visit and comment.
Date: 7/26/2017 9:44:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Thomas! I find this thought-provoking piece to be very appealing! Janice
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/26/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem, and thank you so much for leaving a comment. I enjoy reading the poems of the many talented poets on Poetry Soup.

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