And He Fell

Once, a fellow was swinging on a swing
Which was elfin when comparing
Then the swing splintered
He fell and and fractured his head
And shrilled along with a loud ping
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Ruwindi Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Lol... funny limerick!
Hisham Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Thank you!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 4:58 PM
A funny limerick!
Hisham Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 2:19 AM
Thanks!
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:38 AM
That must have been some fall.. Nice limerick.
Hisham Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:39 AM
Thanks Silent One!
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