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To think of the days that are still to come, Where counts one’s heart in this narrow world, The sun has set and lights grow dim. Here falls the night there goes my day; But I, a prey have illusions to form, Of the bitter core in my motherland.

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Date: 1/12/2010 11:50:00 AM
One to ponder here, jai ... will have to read it again ... smile ...
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Date: 1/11/2010 2:00:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week jai >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:58:00 AM
Profound pouring of the souls most inner feelings and yearnings. Thank you for sharing, Jai. Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jai. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:40:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:59:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with our writing. Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:32:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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