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Ancient To Modern


Ancient to modern
Natures innocence struggles
Amidst crude demise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:14:00 PM

Good one, james.I sure am seeing you with lots of wins lately! Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest James. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 7:08:00 PM

Congratulatiions on your success in the contest, James. "Crude demise" is a nice play on words for the oil slick. Nice work!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/15/2010 3:20:00 PM

Congrats on your 6th Place win in the contest, James....Very nice! ....Later, Jimmy

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2010 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your # 6 James. Agape, Moses

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/14/2010 6:12:00 PM

So many good poems in this contest. Yours is a deserving entry. Congratulations! RAY

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:04:00 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in the new contest by Raul..great write and another top ten win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie

Date: 5/14/2010 12:30:00 PM

Thought provoking poem with so much depth for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on your 6th place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go my friend! Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/14/2010 7:59:00 AM

Glad the rumors of your leaving are greatly exagerated!!! the verse holds thinks to ponder! Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/14/2010 12:10:00 AM

James, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

Joe Flach

Date: 5/13/2010 9:27:00 PM

Terrific commentary on the picture for this contest. Very witty and intelligent. Nicely done. Joe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 6:04:00 PM

enjoyed, your rather interesting haiku, It is as if time does not change to some. to others we can not addapt to the struggles of the world,..p.d

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:55:00 PM

Once again, man has failed nature..and there's no excuse! If corporate giants can transport their oil they can surely spend some of that money to secure nature...someone should pay for this horrid mess and then maybe they'll think about the por creatures..They're so blind that they never realize that when your health is gone you've lost everything..and when you destroy nature you destroy man...Good luck, James...love, Audrey

Amy Green

Date: 5/13/2010 3:53:00 PM

Crude demise... literally...sad... pisses me off. You did a great job capturing this pic.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 3:34:00 PM

The Highlander has done it again .. a perfect Haiku for the photo presented James and good luck in Raul's contest with this one.. winner is written on it for sure.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 5/13/2010 3:24:00 PM

Good luck in the contet, James....Later, Bro. ...Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:16:00 PM

Interesting interpertation of the picture...Sad plight of the environment...Thanks for the kind comments on my work...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara