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Ancient Rock Beat

Ancient Metronome,
Keeps beat with streams steady flow.
Brings perfect rhythm.


For Raul's contest "Rhythm of the Falls"  Thanks again!!

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Doris Culverhouse

October 19, 2009 at 11:06 AM

great job!

Brian Strand

October 8, 2009 at 7:17 AM

Bes wishes with this one Martin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Doris Culverhouse

October 7, 2009 at 6:50 PM

good luck in the contest, it does look rhythmic also, I sat there looking at the picture and saw several things, it is weird.))

Donna Golden

October 7, 2009 at 5:37 PM

Nice work, Martin! Best of luck in the contest. Donna

October 7, 2009 at 4:09 PM

What an interesting way of carrying the idea of rhythm throughout the the poem. Fits well with the theme. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen