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Ancient Rock Beat

Ancient Metronome, Keeps beat with streams steady flow. Brings perfect rhythm. For Raul's contest "Rhythm of the Falls" Thanks again!!

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/19/2009 11:06:00 AM

great job!

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2009 7:17:00 AM

Bes wishes with this one Martin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/7/2009 6:50:00 PM

good luck in the contest, it does look rhythmic also, I sat there looking at the picture and saw several things, it is weird.))

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 5:37:00 PM

Nice work, Martin! Best of luck in the contest. Donna

Date: 10/7/2009 4:09:00 PM

What an interesting way of carrying the idea of rhythm throughout the the poem. Fits well with the theme. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/7/2009 4:02:00 PM

You've got the "perfect rhythm" in this haiku, Marty! Best wishes for the contest and thanky for commenting my "melting Years"....Gert

James Fraser

Date: 10/7/2009 1:53:00 PM

Kool Haiku Martin >> all the best in Raul's contest >> James

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/7/2009 1:16:00 PM

Great musical interpretation , Marty and best of luck in the " Master's " contest .....

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/7/2009 12:49:00 PM

Wonderful entry, Martin! ~ Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/7/2009 12:19:00 PM

Martin, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2009 12:06:00 PM

My goodness..you catch on fast! This is going to be a winner. BG