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Ancient Bloom

I am a tomb of ancient bloom. I was young once, and pretty. Now that I am of middle age, and beauty fades, I must adjust. To being unseen, no beauty queen. I must not dance or prance about. Although inside I dance still. No one sees the pretty me. I am a tomb, must I mummify? Damn it all, I refuse to die. Still slip on my dancing shoes. Close my eyes, get in the groove. Imagine all eyes still upon me. This acient bloom won't go soon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/4/2016 7:02:00 AM
Jean-lovely poem for a lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/4/2016 9:54:00 AM
It is especially lovely for me today Laura, as my poem CLAN has been featured this week. Thank you as always for stopping by.
Date: 10/3/2016 5:12:00 PM
I love this poem--a 7. Congrats on your win, Jean! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2016 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 10/3/2016 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Jean! ...Fran
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Fran. Same to you.
Date: 5/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
Hi, Jean, nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 5/7/2016 4:30:00 PM
Nice for me to see HM Skat. Thank you.
Date: 3/20/2016 12:01:00 AM
Jean, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2016 1:07:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I am off work for a month now so will have plenty of time to read other poets. Looking forward to learning from you all.
Date: 2/21/2016 10:49:00 PM
Keep dancing anyway! Great write :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:20:00 AM
I intend to Laura. Perhaps just be like Cinderella, and be home before midnight.
Date: 2/21/2016 9:21:00 PM
The beauty that shine from deep within does not dim with time but only glows brighter. Nicely done.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:19:00 AM
True Donald. I always had trouble in my head, placing my mother in the correct age bracket.
Date: 2/21/2016 5:47:00 PM
I seen a video recently with women in their 70s plus who were extremely stylish and vivacious, I thought they were all quite attractive. I love watching women grow into their beauty. My wife is one such woman, at 58 I think she has never been more beautiful. I enjoyed your poem. Check out my "Big Girls do cry" it deals with female empowerment.
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:36:00 PM
Like a game of Snap, may I now direct you to PERFECT ONCE?

Book: Shattered Sighs