Anatomy of Winter

The sun slips a wink 
And wilts a few degrees
Like ritual, September passes
Leaving a wet headache-

October falls fondly,
Pawing the door like a hungry cat. 
Strewing orange gifts and straw.

But Winter arrives,
And a chill broaches the air  
January’s sunset catches the glass. 

The trees branch like bronchi
 Ventricles fall like lace over the eyes
Bloodshot, usurping every last tear-

Underneath here- the skin prickles and bones grow,
Like coral, hard and skeletal, it barbs the nerves.
I’m cold, but every season has its will,
Spring is on the way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Marsiglia Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 3:03 AM
Thank you for the kind words. Mean a lot.
Bangalee Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 10:09 PM
wow wonderful POEM- beautifully dissected the ANATOMY OF WINTER
Flater Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 6:41 AM
I love the words, "trees branch like bronchi" which they do. NoelsArt
Marsiglia Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 3:04 AM
I went to Body World where Dr Gunter plasticises bodies after they die and there was a ton of imagery. Thanks for the comment =)
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