Paige Turner Poet Rhyme

Analysis Paralysis

When you look at your reflection in a mirror, what do you see?
I see a failure, and that failure is me.

I feel like I’m stuck yet I pace up and down.
My face is etched with a worrying frown.

The problem is I tend to fester and then over-think.
At times It’s so bad I feel like I need a drink.

My stomach’s in knots and my mind in a different place.
There’s just so much that I simply can’t face.

But this analysis paralysis will not be the end of me.
First steps needed – deep breaths and a cup of tea.

Music helps me to relax and to calm.
I know that I have support so I’m safe from any harm.

I’m loved by others which makes me warm inside.
I will keep on going – one day I’ll hold my head up with pride.

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Deb M June 25, 2023 at 10:54 PM Late Congratulations on POTD Paige….what a lovely start to your Poetry Soup journey! Cheers Debx

Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2023 at 6:01 AM Congratulations on POTD, Paige! One we can relate to. Glad you find peace in deep breaths, a cup of tea, music and the love of others. I love chai but am now drinking both Lord Gray and especially Lady Gray (love the citrusy notes). I also have some oolong that has such a delightful scent. God bless you with love and peace.

Arlo Parker June 20, 2023 at 7:51 PM Was a time this poem would describe many of my moments...coping is a learned behavior and music is a splendid partner. POTD 2 b sure, Paige. :o] Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:42 PM aww thanks for sharing your comment Arlo x Mental Health Awareness is important, and reaching out is an essential part of the healing process - I prefer to write it down than to talk about it in person. As long as we can all find our own way for coping and expressing our feelings then it's all good. Paige x

Brandy Nicole June 20, 2023 at 6:21 PM Dear Paige, music calms the soul and soothes the heart. (It does for me, anyway.) I'm enjoying the soft melody at this moment, while reading poetry. Your thoughts hold meaning depth. When you feel overwhelmed, just look around and count your blessings. Welcome to Poetry Soup, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:38 PM Thanks for your sweet comments Brandy x Music really helps - I have my playlist always ready when feeling overwhelmed, my jam jar lid for popping the button in and out to help self-regulate and writing poetry, short stories and books for kids help too. Many thanks x Paige x

Michael Tor June 20, 2023 at 5:13 PM Written Honestly and it is wonderful to have the support and the confidence to overcome. I wish more people especially teenagers that suffer from a self image can read and have the support you share in your poetry. Congratulations Paige for receiving POTD and welcome to Poetry Soup. Looking forward to reading more of your Poetry... Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:35 PM Thanks for your thoughtful comments Michael - indeed I wish more teenagers can look beyond the mirror x Paige x

David Kavanagh June 20, 2023 at 2:03 PM The mirror image can be stark Paige, as indeed your poem is too, but you come across as a fighter, one that tries get back up and carry on, not always easy when the fight appears hopeless, congratulations on a wonderful POTD, stay strong, cheers David Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:33 PM Thanks David x Indeed I am a fighter, and hope the poem reminds others that the battle in not over until the white flag is waved x Paige x

Paula Goldsmith June 20, 2023 at 1:30 PM Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a blessed day writing away................ Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:31 PM Thanks Paula x Hopefully I'll get some time writing some stuff soon for others to enjoy x

Robert Lindley June 20, 2023 at 12:43 PM Congrats on this positive poem my friend. A fav for me.. God bless.. Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:29 PM Thanks Robert. Your comment has made me smile today x Paige x

Heidi Sands June 20, 2023 at 11:49 AM Congratulations for POTD ! Enjoy :) Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:28 PM Thanks for your lovely comment Heidi x Paige x

Stephan McBride June 20, 2023 at 11:30 AM Big welcome to poetry soup with a Poem of the Day, hope you can find comfort, peace and pride in your gift of writing, many need to hear what you have to say and your way of expressing is beautiful to see Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:36 AM Thanks for your lovely comments Stephan. You are very kind with your welcome and I'm looking forward to creating more for the website x Paige x

Jim Slaughter June 20, 2023 at 10:40 AM An interesting...albeit somewhat troubling...selection for POTD, but congrats, anyway, Paige. Have you considered getting rid of all your mirrors? Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:34 AM Hiya Jim, thanks for your comments x I tend not to look in the mirror so much these days - onwards and upwards x Paige x

I Am Anaya June 20, 2023 at 10:18 AM Congratulations on your POTD Paige Turner! "deep breaths and a cup of tea" and writing so therapeutic, helps me when I get a nervous stomach, or maybe my nervous stomach is due to what I write, haha. "Backwards Boy" is a riot-left you a comment and a note ~Enjoy your day! I Am Anaya Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 11:18 AM Thanks for taking time to read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poems x Paige x

Daisy Meadows June 20, 2023 at 10:13 AM A lovely poem. It is nice to know that other people care. It makes a big difference. Congratulations on your POTD. Well written. Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 10:58 AM Thanks Jeanette for your lovely comments x I'm loving the support from the poetrysoup community x

Beata Agustin June 20, 2023 at 9:32 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wise thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 10:54 AM Thanks for your support Beata x I appreciate your heartfelt comments x Paige x

Gershon Wolf June 20, 2023 at 9:00 AM Sounds like the paralysis is succumbing slowly to expert analysis. Congrats on POTD! Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 10:48 AM Thanks for your comment and Gershon it's very much appreciated x

Bill Baker June 20, 2023 at 8:02 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup Paige, and congratulations on your POTD honor! Great title, excellent poetic form, and a message many will resonate with. Thanks for sharing your toughts with us through your poetry. A fellow poet in Texas, Bill Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 8:36 AM Thanks Bill x I really appreciate the feedback. I'm glad it has resonated with you and others x Paige x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 20, 2023 at 7:57 AM This is so lovely, a well crafted hug in poetry form, so happy you received POTD honours and I hope everyone reads this. Congratulations, enjoy your day Paige! xomo Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 8:35 AM awww thanks Maureen. I appreciate your lovely comment x Paige x

Susan Lawrence June 20, 2023 at 7:11 AM We all share with you . We are here to support one another . This is a very wonderful community ! Congratulations on POTD dear Paige and welcome to Soup ! Susan :) Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 8:34 AM Many thanks Susan x looking forward to being part of the soup community x Paige x

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 20, 2023 at 6:31 AM Warm congratulations on your POTD, Dear Paige. Sometimes we all feel the same way..it's great that you have support. Here is a like-minded community, where you will find appreciation for your creativity. Hugs ~ Mala Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 6:59 AM Thanks so much for your comment Mala xx I feel truly loved and appreciated on poetrysoup. I love how creative and supportive everyone is of each other on here x Paige x

Lin Lane June 20, 2023 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on your first potd, Paige. Music soothes me, too. Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 6:08 AM Thanks Lin - it's so theraputic x

Mike Gentile June 20, 2023 at 4:27 AM Paige, you so poetically portray so many relatable feelings here with this insightful write!! Congratulations on your POTD honors !!! Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 4:43 AM Thanks Mike - I really appreciate your supportive comments. Kindness breeds kindness. You are so kind x Paige x

Unseeking Seeker June 20, 2023 at 4:10 AM Indeed, analysis is paralysis. Let go and flow. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Paige Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 4:42 AM Thanks for your comment Unseeking Seeker x I am getting better at letting things flow and not getting stressed about every little thing. I appreciate your positive vibes x Paige x

Tania Kitchin June 20, 2023 at 3:31 AM Paige, a well penned poem, we have all felt this way before. Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 3:50 AM Thanks for your comment Tania x I'm glad it has resonated with others - mental health matters, and a supportive community forum like poetrysoup really helps x

Jan Allison June 20, 2023 at 2:22 AM Many many congrats on POTD Paige, the honour is so well deserved! your poem is one many can relate to. Hugs Jan xx Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 2:23 AM Thanks for your unwavering support Jan x Paige x

Paige Turner June 20, 2023 at 1:35 AM Wow wow wow. I've only been on the site a few days so never expected to get P.O.T.D. Thanks to everyone for the support and for those people who decided on Analysis Paralysis as P.O.T.D. I Hope other people can use their creativity too if struggling with their mental health. This has made my day. Paige x

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