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Poetic Form: Monoku
Inspired: 2023 December 12
Image: Carnivorous Plants Fly by Giphy PBS Digital Studios

carnivorous plants fly GIF by PBS Digital Studios

Party it up with the Wrights

as life goes on ... for some ~~ for some held hope ... as the other held hope too

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Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 2:14:00 PM

Such is the beauty and enigma of nature...Nice one.. make sure you don't get your fingers caught in these...

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/14/2023 4:19:00 PM

Oh, now you tel...I think Amazon sell those. You got to admire the natural mechanics, and I wouldn't be surprised if the Pentagon or foreign power or something, may have something in the works. Thanks, Silent One. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2023 3:56:00 AM

It is sad that some give their life for others to live, but as you said, C'est la vie mon amie.. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K I like that Venus Fly Trap. I would not want one to be large enough to eat humans.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/13/2023 7:00:00 AM

Sara, that is the order of the fittest, and the ingenious mechanics of their innate being, such a wonder. Thank you and you're welcome as always, my friend. Aloha, William

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 7:27:00 PM

Oh, this is quite an intriguing monoku that reflects so much.. Each held hope but life goes on inclining to the nature as it's written.. Very wonderfully crafted! It's always a pleasure to read your poems..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2023 10:06:00 PM

I am honored, Hiya, with your integral interest, my friend. Aloha, always, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2023 4:30:00 PM

Very nice.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2023 4:57:00 PM

Fly thought it was an Epoch event--how many Epics were there