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Analogous Sunset

Above Open Fields,
Contrails Scratch The Colored Sky;
Mountains And Trees Sleep.

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/10/2009 1:59:00 AM

Tyler, Congratulations on the feature of this remarkable haiku...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/6/2009 3:49:00 PM

Dear Tyler,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Analogous Sunset"I see why YOU like Haiku so much, because YOU do such a Superb Job of writing them Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/6/2009 7:17:00 AM

Very lovely Haiku! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/5/2009 9:38:00 PM

Nice Haiku. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on having your haiku featured this week. Love, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/4/2009 9:06:00 AM

Congrat Tyler on your haiku being featured. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/4/2009 7:41:00 AM

Awesome haiku. Warmest congrats on an excellent featured write. Love, Shar

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/4/2009 4:09:00 AM

Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/3/2009 10:19:00 PM

Amaking Haiku poem. Congratulations on your featured piece of art. Mine is also featured. Ernilando

Date: 5/3/2009 6:42:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to convey your thought in just three lines. Congratulations on having your haiku featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/3/2009 6:02:00 PM

Lovely work! Congratulations on being featured this week! Carrie

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/19/2009 2:00:00 PM

this is a great write i love reading and writing haiku poetry ........thank for your continued comments!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2009 2:05:00 PM

Tyler, thanks for your comment on my poems. Please write more so I can read more of your work!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 7:32:00 PM

Tyler, the irony of contrails soaring over peaceful nature is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work! Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 1/28/2009 4:09:00 PM

Nice haiku, Tyler. I liked your description, "Contrails scratch the Colored Sky". Donna G.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/28/2009 3:59:00 AM

This is beautiful, Tyler. A piece of paradise in this write. Your images are great. Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Welcome to the Soup! Love, Robin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/28/2009 3:49:00 AM

Beautiful haiku. :) check your soup mail. :) Kristin

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/26/2009 3:58:00 PM

NICE POEM TYLER THAT WAS REALLY GOOD...................................DANIELLE

Elaine George

Date: 1/18/2009 1:23:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Tyler. I await more. Love and peace, Lainie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/16/2009 9:45:00 AM

Thank you for commenting on my poem..you have a talent for this form.. this is lovely..glad you are with us. BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 9:41:00 AM

Great job again on this piece. You paint such wonderful pictures with such few words. Welcome to the soup.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2009 9:37:00 AM

love those contrails! that's the white exhaust from a jet aye? Glad you liked my Haiku, I was trying to use similiar sounds. You said it was a mono....? I was actually kinda goofy on the concet of so few words doing much of anything. Needless to say I need to explore the potential more LOL. Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi