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Analogous Sunset

Above Open Fields,
Contrails Scratch The Colored Sky;
Mountains And Trees Sleep.

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Raul Moreno

May 10, 2009 at 1:59 AM

Tyler, Congratulations on the feature of this remarkable haiku...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

May 6, 2009 at 3:49 PM

Dear Tyler,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Analogous Sunset"I see why YOU like Haiku so much, because YOU do such a Superb Job of writing them Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG

Laura Mckenzie

May 6, 2009 at 7:17 AM

Very lovely Haiku! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Lena Townsend

May 5, 2009 at 9:38 PM

Nice Haiku. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 4, 2009 at 10:37 AM

Congratulations on having your haiku featured this week. Love, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

May 4, 2009 at 9:06 AM

Congrat Tyler on your haiku being featured. Vince

Sharon Winter

May 4, 2009 at 7:41 AM

Awesome haiku. Warmest congrats on an excellent featured write. Love, Shar

Anna-Marie Docherty

May 4, 2009 at 4:09 AM

Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Ernilando Tugaff

May 3, 2009 at 10:19 PM

Amaking Haiku poem. Congratulations on your featured piece of art. Mine is also featured. Ernilando

May 3, 2009 at 6:42 PM

Nice use of imagery to convey your thought in just three lines. Congratulations on having your haiku featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carrie Richards

May 3, 2009 at 6:02 PM

Lovely work! Congratulations on being featured this week! Carrie

Abe Lopez

February 19, 2009 at 2:00 PM

this is a great write i love reading and writing haiku poetry ........thank for your continued comments!

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2009 at 2:05 PM

Tyler, thanks for your comment on my poems. Please write more so I can read more of your work!

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 7:32 PM

Tyler, the irony of contrails soaring over peaceful nature is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work! Carolyn

Donna Golden

January 28, 2009 at 4:09 PM

Nice haiku, Tyler. I liked your description, "Contrails scratch the Colored Sky". Donna G.

Robin L. Gass

January 28, 2009 at 3:59 AM

This is beautiful, Tyler. A piece of paradise in this write. Your images are great. Thank you for sharing and your thoughtful comment. Welcome to the Soup! Love, Robin

Kristin Reynolds

January 28, 2009 at 3:49 AM

Beautiful haiku. :) check your soup mail. :) Kristin

Danielle Moreno

January 26, 2009 at 3:58 PM

NICE POEM TYLER THAT WAS REALLY GOOD...................................DANIELLE

Elaine George

January 18, 2009 at 1:23 AM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Tyler. I await more. Love and peace, Lainie

Barbara Gorelick

January 16, 2009 at 9:45 AM

Thank you for commenting on my poem..you have a talent for this form.. this is lovely..glad you are with us. BG

Christopher Higgins

January 16, 2009 at 9:41 AM

Great job again on this piece. You paint such wonderful pictures with such few words. Welcome to the soup.

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2009 at 9:37 AM

love those contrails! that's the white exhaust from a jet aye? Glad you liked my Haiku, I was trying to use similiar sounds. You said it was a mono....? I was actually kinda goofy on the concet of so few words doing much of anything. Needless to say I need to explore the potential more LOL. Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi