Ana

Ana

she steals bits of lives
to mend 
the holes in dreams.
weaves a cocoon 
of unreality patching leaks.
her logos 
strained with eternal doubt,
mortal sin upon sin, 
cast like dark blossoms.
god laughing at his trick
creation, a double indamnity
of need and confusion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Lovely, Patricia. Very intriguing.
Cresswell Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Thank you Line.
Michael Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Poor Ann...In the end, she'll probably be twice as blessed after creating such a mess...after left and right, the center is the heart... I enjoyed it...All the best Patricia
Cresswell Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:45 PM
I guess we all go through a little hell before we make it to heaven. Thank you Arturo.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:25 PM
Enjoyed lovely :) xomo!
Cresswell Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:44 PM
Thanks deary you are a friend.
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