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An Unwanted Guest

One night as I was trying to fall asleep, getting all comfy underneath the cotton sheets, all's I could hear was the ticking of my clock, everyone asleep except for me in my pajama frock, Tossing and turning was the usual routine, like a dog going in circles till he runs out of energy, my pillow getting the usual pounding and fluffing, hearing a distant sound that was rather muffled, It was like a distant sound that was animated, like a soft rustling part of my blanket was getting invaded, hearing the sound of little marching feet getting closer, I could feel my heart pounding and my forehead getting moister, But then the marching was too close and I didn't have a choice, so I turned on the light to see what was making the noise, staring at horror at the three inch centipede on my blanket, it was a situation where I didn't want to end up being a banquet, So I bravely threw the centipede across my room, not sure where it landed and wishing I had a broom, searching high and low for its carcass, looking at every square inch in my carpet, To this day I don't know where the little bugger went, but the rest of that night I thought possibly the floor vent, which I closed up just in case he decided to come back, not sleeping a wink becoming a sentry in my sack. 2-22-17

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Date: 3/6/2017 1:21:00 AM
Very creepy indeed, but it gave you a good place in the contest. Congratulations :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/6/2017 7:46:00 AM
It was Darren; I'm guessing he came from our crawl space/basement which is underneath my room…thanks for kind comment & stop by~Che :)
Date: 3/5/2017 12:04:00 PM
The imagery really made me smile - so glad you gave it its marching orders:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/5/2017 7:24:00 PM
Lol, marching orders! Glad made you smile; thanks for kind comment; win is nice surprise!~hugs Che xx
Date: 3/5/2017 10:52:00 AM
A creepy crawler..Congrats on your win Cheryl
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/5/2017 7:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment;win is a nice surprise!~Che :)
Date: 2/23/2017 7:51:00 AM
Aren't they poisonous? I would have freaked out and never been able to sleep until he was found. Funny but a little creepy, Mrs Cheryl:)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/23/2017 8:08:00 AM
I hope no idea; but I hope not lol! It was definitely freaky and creepy! Thanks for kind comment Daniel!~Che :)

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