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An Untimed Shower

Seafoam dreams massage deep into my scalp, as uncomely thoughts drift drain-ward destined. A warm, white noise water rush of comfort cradles me back to the days of my womb home, with the only goal of growing and thriving. 11/9/19

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/29/2019 6:43:00 AM

Wow, this is good. Excellent. Kind wishes, Kai

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/29/2019 10:34:00 AM

Thanks, Kai.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/17/2019 5:53:00 AM

Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Juliet - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/17/2019 11:02:00 PM

Thanks, Gregory. Blessings.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/27/2019 6:31:00 AM

Powerful and meaningful. Nicely penned. Kind wishes, Kai

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/17/2019 11:02:00 PM

Thanks, Kai.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 5:41:00 AM

A lovely write and a fav for me :-) x

Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:24:00 AM

Thanks, Elaine. Bless your heart.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2019 7:59:00 PM

this actually put me in mind of when a beautician warmly washes my hair and I lean my head back into their special sink bowl. This is really creative poetry, Juliet. I enjoyed this mucho.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2019 9:24:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I can picture that, too.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/10/2019 2:40:00 PM

great use of metaphor in this one... hugs

Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/11/2019 12:10:00 AM

Thanks, Sandra. Poetic hugs.

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 6:49:00 AM

That's is a brilliant first line . Great goal to have my friend ..

Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/11/2019 12:09:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate it.