Juliet Ligon Poet Free verse

An Untimed Shower

Seafoam dreams massage deep into my scalp,
as uncomely thoughts drift drain-ward destined. 
A warm, white noise water rush of comfort 
cradles me back to the days of my womb home, 
with the only goal of growing and thriving.


11/9/19

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Kai Michael Neumann December 29, 2019 at 6:43 AM Wow, this is good. Excellent. Kind wishes, Kai Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 10:34 AM Thanks, Kai.

Gregory Richard Barden December 17, 2019 at 5:53 AM Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Juliet - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3 Juliet Ligon December 17, 2019 at 11:02 PM Thanks, Gregory. Blessings.

Kai Michael Neumann November 27, 2019 at 6:31 AM Powerful and meaningful. Nicely penned. Kind wishes, Kai Juliet Ligon December 17, 2019 at 11:02 PM Thanks, Kai.

Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 5:41 AM A lovely write and a fav for me :-) x Juliet Ligon November 13, 2019 at 9:24 AM Thanks, Elaine. Bless your heart.

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2019 at 7:59 PM this actually put me in mind of when a beautician warmly washes my hair and I lean my head back into their special sink bowl. This is really creative poetry, Juliet. I enjoyed this mucho. Juliet Ligon November 13, 2019 at 9:24 AM Thanks, Andrea. I can picture that, too.

Sandra Adams November 10, 2019 at 2:40 PM great use of metaphor in this one... hugs Juliet Ligon November 11, 2019 at 12:10 AM Thanks, Sandra. Poetic hugs.

Silent One November 10, 2019 at 6:49 AM That's is a brilliant first line . Great goal to have my friend .. Juliet Ligon November 11, 2019 at 12:09 AM Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate it.