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An Unlikely Duo

Watching her board bathed in fog at the station Spectacles slide down the bridge of his nose Usually a blur, not in this situation Smudges can’t hide every beauty she shows Lugging a satchel in high heels and cotton In her left hand rests a statue that grins Such an odd sight, this her concrete companion Never you mind as the journey begins Timidly calling the glass doors to open Counting his change spread of nickels and dimes Gasping for breath on a curb painted yellow Escaping the past, oh those horrible times Filled every row, ‘cept a seat near the driver All eyes affixed as the vinyl bench sighs Kicking her shoes to abbreviate blisters Freedom is felt in the footwear goodbyes Nervous he waves from the corner still pacing Climbing the steps of a Westminster bus Pulled at his limbs by another intrusion Faking his mood so she thinks there’s a fuss Taking a seat between cement and flannel Rolling his eyes that he don’t mean at all Watching her lips as she inhales discretely Feeling his library heart start to fall She tugs his ear with her thin ringless fingers Whispers a secret he hopes comes to share Hides from the window, the vehicle moving Nary a glance towards the morning sun’s glare She holds her gnome like her life is depending When all she needs fills the seat right next door Porcelain dust on her clothes has her sneezing Handkerchief offered he nicked at the store Such is the dream of a bookworm delivered Finding the chapter he’d thought long ago Angels and demons and pretzel tan loafers Potholes and clues juggled way down below What is this trail winding out to the country She gives a smile so much more than the fare Holding on tight to a vested creation Seeking adventure of those debonair Here now we find such an unlikely duo Still in their eyes shines reflections of grace She has her man and her plan contemplated He has his heart in the very same place Exhaust fumes emit in a paisley frost pattern Corduroy sidewalks bid all a farewell Searching for love is the now destination What will they find, only time it will tell And as a western of popcorn persuasion Into the sunset, they fade in the glow What once was billed as a short presentation Nowhere on this page will “The End” now show Based on characters in a novel a friend is writing on another site. Say hello to Elke and Henry, both kind of quirky. I don’t expect you to get this but thought you might enjoy reading. I also wrote a sequel if anyone is interested.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/30/2016 12:44:00 PM
lol this is so cute! you did a great job, it really works well with your meter. they sound like quirky characters alright! moving on to part two...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/30/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. I was hoping you would like this one.
Date: 11/29/2016 5:32:00 PM
Hi Chris, You have a penned a well written story.I was drawn to every word. I can't wait to see what's in store for this unlikely couple. Off to read part two:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 5:40:00 PM
Hey there my sweet friend. I'm glad you found this one. It is kind of screwy but it was fun to write. I am thrilled you enjoyed this first part.
Date: 11/29/2016 3:45:00 PM
Come on, give me the sequel before curiosity kills this cat! An excellent and intriguingly thought provoking poem, Chris. Thank you for the smile it put on my face.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks so much Christy. I am happy to make you smile. I will post it in just a bit.
Date: 11/29/2016 2:26:00 PM
ohh, the sense of anticipation is non-stop... a heightened, smashing read, chris!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thanks so very much Nette. I am thrilled you enjoyed this little adventure.
Date: 11/29/2016 2:11:00 PM
I'd love to read more ..if there is more...Just loved this...I could picture the lady slightly removing her shoes to let her feet relax....and all the sweet story in the poem..Just lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thanks so very much Charmaine, I am so happy you could picture this. Your kind words are very welcome today. And yes, there is more, maybe later I will post it.
Date: 11/29/2016 2:03:00 PM
Such a vivid descriptive write you draw the reader in with your tale...Do let us know when the book is finished Chris it sounds fascinating!:-) You should write a book too Chris!!!! hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 2:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I think I'll leave the book writing to her, she is very good at it and I'll just stick to my poetry. :) I appreciate your kind words though and I will let you know when the book is finished. It is very, very cool.
Date: 11/29/2016 12:31:00 PM
Chris, you are good at writing suspense, as you are romance. Excellent!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 1:01:00 PM
Thanks so very much Heidi. Your nice comments always mean so much to me.
Date: 11/29/2016 12:18:00 PM
Great Work!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thanks so very much for reading and commenting.
Date: 11/29/2016 11:55:00 AM
Well that held me rapt Chris, thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 11/29/2016 11:16:00 AM
Chris, more than just having a way with words and rhyme, you pull the reader along in joyful comfort and anticipation.
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Date: 11/29/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Doug, I appreciate that and I am glad you enjoyed this madcap escapade. This is based on characters from a book a friend is writing and she is an amazing author. It is her quirky and unique style that prompted this piece. Elke has enticed Henry (the librarian) to join her on a grand adventure to find a missing accountant. He sees his now to be ex-girlfriend on the library steps calling to him as he boards the bus. He has had feelings for Elke for a while and she for him, but neither has shown them to the other. And yes Elke carries a cement gnome named Lumpkey with her. Just to give you a little back story.

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