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An Unconventional Valentine

Let me contrast you with a rose in bloom Whose unfurled buds exude a sweet perfume. Eternal token of romantic zeal On lease from heaven with a loving seal. You, in comparison, with beard untrimmed, Complexion florid and your vision dimmed, Have no external beauty to extol; Possession of long life must take its toll. Not always temperate your moods break through And like a rose you can be prickly too. But though a shade of what you used to be, You're worth your weight in gold to me! 16.08.19 'A summer's day re-do poetry contest sponsored by Michelle Faulkner (obligatory words used : temperate, buds, lease, possession, heaven, complexion, eternal, gold, untrimmed, shade)

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Date: 8/30/2019 6:30:00 PM
"Not always temperate your moods break through And like a rose you can be prickly too." I love the way these lines personalize your vision of accepting the bad with the good. Congratulations Wendy! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:23:00 PM
This is a great use of the required words, Wendy, thanks for entering my contest!
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Date: 8/16/2019 1:52:00 PM
Excellent! Well done :)
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Date: 8/16/2019 1:09:00 PM
you have woven the words in BRILLIANTLY I am sure Shakesepare would have been pleased to write such a beautiful rhyme as this:-) Good luck in the contest, this will do very well I am sure:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Watson
Date: 8/20/2019 4:36:00 PM
What a lovely comment, Jan. I’m not sure how well such a missive would be received though!

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