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An Unanswered Phone

I see the yarn and I remember I bought it for my mother to knit But she went to heaven in January Her fancy never used tropical paper napkins Are a reminder every time I open the drawer My mother is gone. My mother is gone. I pick up the phone for the hundredth time To tell her something crazy that has happened Something she will never believe, something funny. The yarn and the napkins smile. Remembering what I do not As I listen to the phone ring and ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/21/2020 2:55:00 PM
Our Mothers live in our hearts and they never leave. Look in and take a peek from time to time and you will see. Great tribute to your Mom. I'm sorry for your loss.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2020 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for understanding.
Date: 3/21/2020 11:34:00 AM
Caren, my mother was my best friend, and everyday since her death I have wanted to tell her something or seen something that reminds me of her and I think I have seen her at the shopping center, so I understand how your are feeling, I could say this will pass but well, not sure _Constance
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2020 6:59:00 PM
I think this feeling may last for years. Thanks for stopping.
Date: 3/21/2020 11:06:00 AM
Poignant poem Caren. Yet also inspiring. Good one!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Eric. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/21/2020 9:27:00 AM
Hi Caren, I feel the deep emotion you feel within the lines of this special poem. Poetry from the heart. Has to be a fav. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Mike. It is so real.
Date: 3/21/2020 8:22:00 AM
So sad. My granddaughter would still leave messages for her grandfather for a while after he died. Sending you a hug. I can feel your sadness and loneliness.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/21/2020 7:04:00 PM
I picked up the phone again today....
Date: 3/20/2020 8:59:00 PM
wow, this is outstanding emotive writing, Caren. FAVE
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/20/2020 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I feel honored. I still think my mother is here and she has been gone since January 28th.

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