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An Outsider Drawing a Wide Berth around a Playing Field of Rye

73 years ago 
A kid my age steps off a curb.
And, in the motion of falling, he believes he can reach heaven.
He has the thoughts of someone 
with an inverted ribcage
And he’s sick on cigarette smoke and hypocrisy.
A kid my age, 73 years ago, calls me a pervert.
Through the thin veil of time and space 
We lock eyes.
I say “I see you.”
He says “You’re sick.”
But that’s wrong and he knows it.
I am not the sick one.
He is the kid with the killing hat
And the giving hands
That despise the people he gives to.
He is the kid with filthy thoughts and phony smiles
Who sees the hollow spaces between his ribs
In the innocence of a child’s eyes.
And despite the filth beneath his tongue 
And the alcohol stinging his throat
I cannot bring myself to 
Feel anything for him
other than
Pity.
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Edmonds  Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Tyler, a moving write… Beryl
Ashley Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Dear Tyler, your poignant poem is filled with evocative, emotive imagery that provokes the reader to unravel it and revel in the power of your creative expression. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:09 AM
The title drew me in Tyler with its JD Salinger overtones and themes of phoniness, alienation (and suicide??) Deep and hard hitting. Cheers - Gary
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 8:39 AM
Love the drama and imagery in your poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Agustin Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Toney Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Tyler, welcome to Poetry Soup! Yours is a powerful poem that confronts hypocrisy, alienation, and pity. I love the literary allusion to J D Salinger’s character Holden Caulfield from “The Catcher In The Rye,” even as hinted by your poem’s title. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 17 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 18 has already started.
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