An Open Soul To Hidden Truths

There is a certain pride in my heart, 
Deep in the gut of my soul, 
And in every moving cell working for the other
That preaches and presses in a padded jail
Where no other living soul can hear 
Treasurable, valuable words being uttered 
With conviction and every golden verdict

It is a silent pride, and a sad one at times,
Longing to be heard, though it cannot reveal
Longing to be shared with a parched mind
That can only reveal itself through the continual
Ritual of living each day
I want to share with utter integrity and light,
With a full heart, to activate the gentle expansion
Of freeing, outstretched wings

You cannot listen to these truths I scream
Because I am closed away by this pride, 
My cognizance and cruel prudence imprisons me, 
And at times I am happily bound

This pride, this opulent air of knowing
Restlessly deepens within 
It seeps deeper inside,
Because I doubt any will quite understand
And appreciate 

Through the lens of pure honesty
This pride is fearful and selfish
We do not want to be seen as a fool
I want these confessions to feel
Omnipotent, and apart from my emotions
Pure honesty reminds me
That without emotions, without feeling…
This knowledge, this enlightenment
Cannot be expressed
Unless fear, cramping the soul
Leaves this prison
If love eases breakage to flow into tender ears
To compassionate minds,
And perceptive hearts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/7/2016 10:35:00 PM
Fear is a shadow of pride when the heart does not fully trust it's strength Laura, and your poem reveals how we can strifle our souls when we convince ourselves that the world will deny our honesty. You encourage to give at the risk of being known, which for the honest heart is the only way to breathe. This is inspiring introspective poetry Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/9/2016 7:48:00 PM
Sometimes fear helps us realize that freedom is more valuable, and that love will extinguish it. We are destined, you and I, to break from prisons and make statements that will change people and the world! <3~Laura
Date: 3/6/2016 6:30:00 PM
It's a complex thing to reveal your whole-self, especially in the mind of a perfectionist ... who can know what others will say and think? And will you be daring enough to express yourself accurately? This poem makes the little gray cells in my head work overtime to comprehend what it must be like to be screaming truths in a sound-proof room where none can hear ... Don't let fear rule the day. There are many at the Soup with our ears perked.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/7/2016 1:23:00 AM
Thank you Timothy, for the in-depth review, and of course the sweet encouragement. Love will break through so fear can slip out! Always, Laura
Date: 3/6/2016 2:52:00 PM
Is that a camouflage hat you are wearing? Billions of brain cells working together, but you are sharing the inner secret messages. So very funny! There are always shades of everything, and they vacillate. Can you be the extreme in the spectrum? So in the humility/pride/vanity set of emotions, what would Aristotle say? See http://users.ipfw.edu/caseldij/Ethics/Golden%20Mean.pdf for a very brief summary. I have to print this out and tape it to my cubicle at work. U be totally OK in my I's.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/7/2016 1:22:00 AM
Yes, thank you for reminding me, and I like the chart! Thank you for the delightful praise. You are so sweet to take your time here. ~Laura
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/6/2016 6:35:00 PM
I figured you must have had a philosophy class, but I thought I would mention it just for the fun of it. Yosemite is not a bad place to roam. Keep up the great work. You are exploring the intricate details of thought. It's icing on the poetry cake for us. What a beautiful processor you are!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/6/2016 5:33:00 PM
It's funny, I've been studying a bit of Aristotle lately, and thank you for the usual sweetness. Thanks for the link - I've seen a similar chart in a philosophy class I took two semesters back. It's all about finding that in-between, the balance if you will, or as he put it in an excerpt, finding the midpoint. (I actually implemented a little bit of Aristotle in my Calm series, which is posted here...though Calm is a demon, once an angel and sees the midpoint is becoming a human being...I have yet to carry on with that series along with others ....) My hat isn't camouflage, but it does look that way in the picture because of the camo rock behind me haha. It's just a regular old hat. Took this picture at Yosemite National Park, one of my favorite places in the world. (: ~Laura
Date: 3/6/2016 10:27:00 AM
I was watching the movie Inside Out with my daughters last night. It was about how every emotion has a purpose. This poem emulates that. Very well done Laura.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/6/2016 5:34:00 PM
That's a cute movie ^_^ Thank you Tim, for taking the time to read this one. ~Laura
Date: 3/6/2016 9:55:00 AM
I see contrasts in this poem that make it a most interesting read. Very deep thinking poem. And what i take from it is the importance of emotional honesty.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/6/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, and you are definitely on point! (: Thank you for understanding it. ~Laura
Date: 3/6/2016 7:28:00 AM
Sadly some people can't handle the truth. I agree, without emotions the revelations of our souls cannot be emparted on others. This is an impactful piece, several rungs above fear and emotionaly relevant. Well done.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/6/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet, in-depth review, Richard. Gonna check out your page today (: Sometimes emotions can mesh up the underlying meaning behind the words being confessed or spoken, other times emotions enhance it. Fear of coming on too strong and forceful led to a silent heart. Only a select few can handle it, you're right! ~Laura
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