An Oldcity

A fellow humor smoothens a sight
When armor links and began to fight
Archers lowered when they pass
And whistle a blow as they has

The shadow call for shine
Or it twinkle every line
When you should laughed to faught to signed
It never hump so they will be kind

Even a sweet tame 
Or as a long fame
When there was no grain
You looked liked a chain

T he room was dark
And hallowed fall was mark
When glamorous sings for every hived
It takes sweet fall of blind

It touches foot of stone
For nothing was left alone
On the city where no one was called
When an angel drops a human fold


As the buffalos came along to string
to far along
And wind blows like a whistle song

Every street was full of darkness
Every rocky street was full of happiness
When it shievers a lot 
When was the las time of pot

Hollyness was gone
When thieves came along to fun
No One ever thaught
Of kindness of every man they caught

It shares a lot for me
But how can you be a great bee
When a lot of humors came to flee
And a danger zone came to be.

As people cry for humanity
No one else came for their dignity
Every divine divinity
Was hung for sadness and humility

I t takes a walk for every mile of hope
To share a light to cope
It solds a  mine for them to eat
And wash thier own feet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/15/2024 8:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:34:00 PM
Hi Ana, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 7:54:00 PM
ANA, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:35:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:46:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, hope you find much happiness here and may your inspiration flow freely!
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