An Old Shovel

In 1890, cowboy Bob Womack found gold at the base of lofty Pikes Peak!
In short order a ramshackle town was founded called Cripple Creek.
Hordes of gamblers, 'soiled doves' and prospectors hopin' to make a buck,
Heeded the call of 'Pikes Peak Or Bust' and fled west to try their luck!

This 'peaked' the interest of a young Hoosier feller named Oliver Pence,
Who ordered a shovel from the Sears Roebuck Catalog for eighty-seven cents.
(He called Cripple Creek, Cripple 'Crick' since that's how Hoosiers speak!)
He strapped the shovel to Fred his mule and headed west his fortune to seek!

Oliver staked his claims and his shovel left many a diggin' 'long the way.
His shafts and holes in the hills and vales can be seen to this very day!
He'd found a few nuggets and a bit of dust but didn't 'mount to much.
What he did find he'd blowed on gamblin', whiskey, wimmen and such!

Often, he'd lean on his trusty shovel and muse 'bout his fate.
He talked to the shovel, sayin, "We ain't had much luck as of late.
We'll winter in the cabin and come spring we'll continue our quest;
I'll strap you on old Fred and we'll head fer them hills to the west!"

Seasons came and went and Oliver wasn't seen 'bout town much anymore.
On a cold and dreary day, friends found him stiff dead on the hovel floor!
They dug his grave with the shovel and buried him outside the cabin door.
Six feet down the old shovel struck gold - the lode he'd been a-lookin' for!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Romios Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Hi Bob, I must be a gypsy! Or a Fortune teller. I said this should be a POTD. Even better..it’s been blessed native one of the top 100 new pounds. Congratulations, Bob… way to go! Pangie xx
Lindley Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 1:45 PM
My good friend, I absolutely love this gem. And the ending was for me a perfect ending. A great poem and a true pleasure to read. Definitely a fav for me! God bless.
Hinshaw Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:34 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. I'm honored that you consider it a fav. Best to you as you continue on your poetical journey Bob H
Cunningham Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:09 AM
I love westerns Bob and I love this one, so well written. Good luck in the contest pardner. A big fave from me. Tom
Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:49 PM
A delightful story Robert. Poor ol' Oliver was asittin' on it all along. I love the western flair you have in your writings Robert. So glad Pangie turned me on to them! :)
Hinshaw Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you so much for your kind remarks, Linda - glad you enjoyed. I love the "wild west" and enjoy writing about it. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Bowring Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Such great story telling Robert. The poem flows so well and it is very entertaining. I enjoyed being transported back to the old West. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
Hinshaw Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Thank you so much, Christina, for your kind comments. I live in Colorado in the "wild west" and have written a number of western/cowboy type stuff. Great to hear from you and best to you as you continue your poetical journey! Bob H
Romios Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Glorious write, Bob! Tells a wonderful story, I am dense-about the old West. But you have the ability to bring it to life! I can picture the scenes and characters. I do admire your writing ability. This should be a POTD,my friend, hands down! A fave in my book! Panagiota
Hinshaw Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Thanks, Pangie. The part about discovery of gold by Bob Womack at Cripple Creek is true and the rest is fictional. Wish I could come up with more about the old west - Bob H
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