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An Old Friend -Kib

My mouth urges for divine taste A dinner...a la carte Some fine wine, Chianti Your mothers touch...her specialty She has givin it heart Bon Appetite, dear ex I'm having an old friend for dinner Keep It Brief Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 8-4-2019

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James Inman

Date: 8/31/2019 9:29:00 PM

A great write and succulent dinner Charles.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/14/2019 5:04:00 AM

Slow and a bit bitter flow of a former love... I did like Andrea. Congrats, Charles)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2019 7:29:00 PM

loved this one. Congrats!!

Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/11/2019 6:17:00 PM

great job Charles, well done and congrats :)-luloo

Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Lu. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2019 3:21:00 PM

charles, enjoyed the imaginative word play; i didn't see the last line coming... this could have received a higher placement were it not for unintended typo errors... best of congrats and thanks for joining my contest!

Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 6:11:00 AM

BTW, I fixed it (lol) "devive to divine" No wonder English was my worst subject (lol) Thanks again....hugs :)

Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:53:00 AM

I loved this contest Nette. Thank you so much for my winning placement. Honored I am. :) Huggs // Charlie :)