Get Your Premium Membership

An Old Friend -Kib

My mouth urges for divine taste A dinner...a la carte Some fine wine, Chianti Your mothers touch...her specialty She has givin it heart Bon Appetite, dear ex I'm having an old friend for dinner Keep It Brief Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 8-4-2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/31/2019 9:29:00 PM
A great write and succulent dinner Charles.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2019 5:04:00 AM
Slow and a bit bitter flow of a former love... I did like Andrea. Congrats, Charles)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2019 7:29:00 PM
loved this one. Congrats!!
Login to Reply
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 8/11/2019 6:17:00 PM
great job Charles, well done and congrats :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Lu. :)
Date: 8/11/2019 3:21:00 PM
charles, enjoyed the imaginative word play; i didn't see the last line coming... this could have received a higher placement were it not for unintended typo errors... best of congrats and thanks for joining my contest!
Login to Reply
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 6:11:00 AM
BTW, I fixed it (lol) "devive to divine" No wonder English was my worst subject (lol) Thanks again....hugs :)
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:53:00 AM
I loved this contest Nette. Thank you so much for my winning placement. Honored I am. :) Huggs // Charlie :)
Date: 8/5/2019 8:55:00 PM
Wow, beautifully penned, good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Messina Avatar
Charles Messina
Date: 8/12/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you so much M.L. :)
Date: 8/4/2019 7:39:00 PM
You did a GREAT job with that quote. I wish my poem turned out as good as yours. I too liked that quote the best!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 7:39:00 PM
Oh, and thanks for my win in your contest, Charles.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/4/2019 2:51:00 PM
Astoundingly amusing!What a guest for dinner.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry