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I was a dedicated, expert arborist, bringing joy and comfort to shady spaces, As mountains give cool joy to blooms, in butterscotch afternoon's last traces. A love of trees grew in youth, when climbing our oak, four hundred years old, Then having fun in my tree house, soaked in fervor of sunshine uncontrolled. I kept gnarled, graceful trees healthy, giving pleasure and beauty to big eyes, In the greenest possible idle fashion, like the plummy sunrise, full of surprise. Good friends and I picnicked under its limbs, as it was still in the noble family, Like impressible clouds soak up sun hues, that mellow hordes admire happily. Family and I flitted into a gilded future, loving each other and our happy lives, Season to glorious, prolific season, like the time green, wanton spring arrives. I lived in the house of dappled sun, where a maize orb played hide and seek; And redbirds sang lullabies noon and nights, every day of the Chantilly week. Vivacious neighbors came with laughter, like chirpy raucous sound of crickets; And sat upon my sunny front porch steps, as butterflies flitted in the thickets. The street I lived on was quaint and perfumed, by painted roses of the hour, Like fresh baked apple pies on Sundays, with their irresistible, alluring power. Sultry summer was in redolent sachets, like sunshine tapping on the window; And joy was on each pleasant pathway, like primroses that've ever been low. Moonlight caressed vast fruitful fields, in the cool of dramatic, starlit evening, As pearly dewdrops caress lush, emerald grass, when blue world is dreaming. One day I discovered a serious disease, that was affecting the precious Oak! A cure would require time and patience, like the cool exit of aromatic smoke. My gorgeous tree had ever been healthy, as premier green buds, very many. It'd been in our family for generations, like sweetest, ripe fruits, table ready! I gave the beloved tree fond care, like the care nature gives to hues blazing, While applying many remedies, like waltzing foliage as lofty music is playing. Family members were concerned, yet hopeful, like jade spring late in coming, But the magnificent tree began to improve, at intervals of the bees humming. Hard work was rewarded after some time, like the sun's travels through dark; And the northern red oak was healthy again, like red flame catching a spark. We still enjoy its shifting, dusky shadows, and the crimson butterflies gliding, As foaming turquoise waves bring joy, when silk, mellow seagulls are hiding. The family and I were really ecstatic, for we sure had missed our family tree, It was beloved of family for generations, like sweetest, ripe fruit, table ready!

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Date: 7/14/2023 2:22:00 PM
What a wonderful and beautiful talent you have Eve, to write this beautiful poem as well as to help to care for and cure your old oak tree <3 Gosh, I'm so happy to know your tree is healthy again! I bet it knows your love, I'll bet it loves you too! <3
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/14/2023 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for your sweet comments, dear BJ. I am so happy that you enjoyed my story. I must tell you, however, that it is complete fiction. I love trees very much, though, and I do hope they know it! <3
Date: 7/13/2023 1:21:00 PM
- A wonderful story, Evelyn :) - Sounds like a fairy tale ... experiencing happy days in this place with family and friends in a beautiful harmony ... the smell reminiscent of grandmother's love ... and the tree that was so dear to all ... wish I was there :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/13/2023 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for your joy inspiring words, Anne-Lise. Your precious comments delight. ;) hugs
Date: 7/12/2023 5:56:00 PM
thanks evelyn, trees are life, forever, for family to share joy, thanks for the enjoyable poetry
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:16:00 PM
You're most welcome, Yann. Thank you for happiness your words bring. ;)
Date: 7/9/2023 8:29:00 PM
Hello Evelyn, a lovely couplet! Have a blessed week!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/9/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for the happy thoughts, Mulu. Hope your week is blessed, too.
Date: 7/7/2023 9:10:00 PM
Your famous stories I'll try never to miss. This smacks like an old painting by some famous artist. I admire the details and the care of the old oak tree. A vivid arrangement of flowers enhances the scene. A wonderful poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/8/2023 9:42:00 PM
The joy of your words will linger long. Thank you very much, my friend.
Date: 7/7/2023 3:15:00 PM
Your poetic prowess shows in this story, Evelyn---much enjoyed your descriptions around your family tree that was revived with much needed care.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/7/2023 7:56:00 PM
I appreciate your kind expressions so much, Vijay. Blessings

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